i guess its pretty good - i mean its not the best but ill keep reading anyway and i might change my mind laturr. after all, its only chapter one, right?

Wow! I have just started reading your story and since im a reguar reader of L/J I'd very much like if you would update soon and plase put more Lily vs Bella in there it would be so cool if they became friends tho oh i dont know theres a thin line of enimes and frienship with them :-/
I guess I will leave it up to you to figure that out well anywho Great story 100 outa 100 and 2 thumbs up!

it's...good. but i don't like it how you put swear words AND cuss words. that's against my religion

i don't usually review but your little plea got to me. i really like your story.i like it better that most L/J stories.

hey keep up the good work and keep updating soon, very soon!!!!

just wanted to say that your doing great keep it up and dont give up

omg i looooooove your story keep writing and dont give up, you'll get around this writers block

i hope it doesn't take long to get 10 reviews. i really like the story, and hope you update it soon.

Sorry for the 2 reviews but i 4got to add it to chapter alerts and favourite stories so i had to write 2

(applause) i cant wait for you to up date so please hurry! i liked the poem by they way

This was a really good chapter and i was wondering if james left the map on purpose so lily would find out or if it just happened to happen

As always i loved it and i cant wait to read the next chapters great job on the writing!

Lol i on this doesnt have anything to do with the story(it is good so far tho) i really liked the end authors not. ya no the dun dun dun i thought it was really funny

This is turning out to be a really good book! i can't wait to read the next chapters! keep updating!

LOL i really thought it was funny when sirius turned james's hair the same color as lilys! im suprised she didnt yell at sirius for the prank it was a really good chapter keep up the good work!