Really cute one shot...truly enjoyed it! Just wish there was more but I'll make due with starting on your other stories.

short, kind of stupid, really stupid, ... no thanks, bud, better luck next time

i really like it! you should write a little more.....are you planning on it??? it's very steamy! haha.

very good.......you need more sotries like this......you should go further with this one though......if you did it might be able to compare to c-c-can i kiss you

Hmmmm...strange title at first , but it definitely makes sense now, very descriptive loved that,surprised Madam Pince didn't catch them, but I'm not complaining, kind of short, but still excellently worded, can't wait to read more

I think this one was hillarius. Once again your friend and follower, Sefiroth.

short!!! this is very short, to say the least. It also isn't the best fic ever.

It was interesting....

reading this makes me crave for chocolate

This is crap.

I THOUGHT THAT AS GREAT

Hey Jack!

This is a GREAT story! Very steamy!


Absolutely fantastic!

~Becky

great one shot... are u the same jack ryan from the hp boards??? i'm off to read your other stories although i think i've already read them...

candice

very cute little ficlet!!!! It wonderful!!! Loved the last sentence!!!!lol!

Very sexy! Great job!