This was beautiful - I love the family you created and the backstory was very interesting.
Very sweet and cute look into their future lives.

Too much original stuff. Definately an AU story. I don't mean this to be a flame - but you read fanfic to read about he ORIGNAL characters. Not ones you made up.

Stumbled onto this story and found it absolutely wonderful, especially with the kids being called "pumpkin". Initially I was a bit confused as to Ally's age, but figured it out eventually.
I liked the flashbacks to when Harry and Hermione met.

great story!!!! write more!!!!

Harry and Hermione as parents was excellent. Warm and amusing and very real-feeling. Huzzah!

Good to see you were able to post here. Okay, I'm writing my thoughts down as I read along.

>>"And how is it that you know all this and I don't?" Harry asked ...
"Because mum left a note," she said ...
==> *chuckles* Lily is like her mother

==> Er, I was a bit confused when James & Lily switched to calling each other Lionel and Josephine. I take it those are their middle names? I got confused 'cause we don't have such middle names in our culture.

>Did you see the DA's Magazine?"
==>Nice reference to OOTP.


==>Hmm, afraid that dance in the Leaky Cauldron didn't look plausible to me.

>>Dementors will not make him tell his five year old daughter what he and Hermione had done after walking out of that restaurant and going into his flat.
==>Ha ha!

>>"I'm a twin with James, dad, you should probably consider that James, being as alike to mum as he is, provides me constantly with loads of information I don't ask for. "
"Yeah, well," Harry said getting up. "You have a point there."
==> Yeah, you do have a point there.

Cute, but a little hard to follow, but then again that could just mean I'm daft.

I loved this!!!!! it was so FUNNY!!! haha so cute. a few grammar errors, but it was great.

That was so sweet! ^_^ Pumpkins everywhere!!!! heheh! ^^

Cute, very cute. A very funny story. Great job.