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Draco flippin' Malfoy's telly! I love it! I absolutely love it!

Couldn't have put it better myself. In fact..I don't think I will. Except I will add that the end had me laughing. A lot.

Oh..Neville's flower was amazing. I found myself wanting one after reading its description. And Dean's painting seemed wonderful.

Harry saw Fred and George in the midst of the crowd, their freckled faces shining as they gestured energetically with circled forefingers and thumbs. Harry had the sudden notion that The Weasley twins were going to be seeing a lot of the Patil twins in the not too distant future.

I couldn't wait to review this..so I gave in. That line *gestures above* had me laughing out loud

This story is amazing. The doors and when they did that..every part of it was wonderful. Time is of the essence so I unfortunatelly can not comment over every wonderful thing that you have said.

It is so exquisite and elegent one can't help but fall in love with it.

Plates to goblets to doves - how elegant! And hovering plates and goblets - Martha Stewart would be green with envy! I appreciate the theme of the wedding cake, but Voldemort on top of a wedding cake is just so wrong.

You didn't say it, but I could only infer that H & Hr were standing there starkers between the time their white robes were taken upon their return, and the 2nd set of robes appearing at the end of the ceremony. Wondering if that was the case was distracting, and if it wasn't what you intended, maybe you could move up the descriptions of the 2nd set of robes. They were afterall barefoot, and you mentioned the robes against their skin in the chamber, so it was a reasonable, and horrifying, assumption. But no mention of guests reactions to nakedness, either, so I don't know what to think. Great chapter otherwise.

Oh, so perfect. I only tripped on one thing - the word "remotest". I would have preferred "remote". And a kiss seems in order, but maybe that's next...

Oh, and I was bothered that they should have had these conversations before they started - I see now. You certainly understand a lot about love and life. I'm so glad Harry had these conversations, and came to these realizations. It's perfect.

Everyone should have to think like that before marrying - and every decade or so thereafter.