ashleycSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/04
oh god they have the sex life ive always wanted, but have yet to acheive, so comfortable with one another and completely in love, but wild and animalistic in their tendencies. this is great, awesome, one of the greatest series i've ever read, i can't wait to read the next! and you write so well too, it's not all the crass, crude, porn video words, but you actually write intelligently, talentedly, and i love the verbal exchanges between the two, they are so witty and funny, everything you only ever think of to say to a person after the fact, but i love the fact that they say them when its appropriate. u have a shit load of talent, but im off now to read the sequel to this fic. can't wait to find out what raunchiness is in store! |