Oh, nicely done!
I just so happen to absolutely adore that song so it was just something extra for me

I suppose you could have elaborated on their problem with each other and given a little bit more background information about Draco's unexpected close friendship with Harry.
The whole idea of Draco being the Head of a Clan thing, did you figure that on your own or were you inspired by LadyRhiyana? I don't mean to attack your plot or anything. Please, don't take it the wrong way... For someone who wasn't familiar with the whole Clan regime, I think this story could be very confusing.
If you haven't read LadyRhiyana's 'Unforgiven' at FF.net i strongly recommend you do, anyone who supports D/G should! it's a must-read.
Also, I liked the way you set it all out -- the first and last paragraphs were a nice touch, even though i really cannot see Oliver Wood becoming a relationship councellor
ACK-- I hadn't meant for this review to be this long. I still really dig this fic though.
Keep it up!