hahahaha cute chapter i liked it.. you should post another oneshot on here cuz they r cute.. and i alos think u should amek this PG not G.. hahaha but thats just me!
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kaci
p.s. o my u wrote this 3 years ago!

yey realy good idea thats was realy good lol funny and romoantic-ish at the same time i like it

Cute, very cute indeed I'm glad I've checked the recommandations on James/Lily this
This is kinda short but beautifully written

Found this is the recommendations on the forum. It's excellent. Absolutly love it! Very well written and an extensive vocabulary!

--Jessie

haha thats great. lily's thoughts are so funny, you've written her with a studious calculating nature thats i see as so in character. a very original idea, and very typical of sirius. in terms of writing features. great job. great grammer and word choice, so intense because of how fst it flows. that just made it funnier because i almost felt lily fast running flustered thought process, if that makes sense. great fic, i'll definately read more of your work.

Haha! An adorable one shot!
My fav lines:
""Lils, Peter's running around with his pants on fire."

Damn that infernal boy!"

I liked it. I even laughed at one point, I think it was:

Brilliant? Handsome? JAMES? At the realisation, a gasp flew out of her mouth, and, with a shaky hand, she slowly penned in the word 'delusional.'

You made her so endearingly clueless, believably too. And the fluff between them was good too.

This story was recommended here:
http://www.portkey.org/talk/index.php?showtopic=8102.

I understand this has been completed? Better change the status from In Process to Completed then. Many readers filter for Completed stories.

Hi, would you be interested in joining the new L/J Round Robin? We'd love to hear any tips or comments from you! We'd be THRILLED if you wrote a part!!

Please check it out here:

http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=6082

Hope we didn't bother you!

ah! i love it! the pariniod awareness potion - that was BRILLIANT! HAHA! AMAZING!

This is great! I love Lily's little rationalizations for her "paranoia." Very like her, from the way J.K. describes her in the fifth book. Wonderful job!

YAY! Lily and James love and a bonus of matchmaker Sirius! Sweet!