AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 04/01/07
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dhamon45Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 16/08/06
I think the reason they had sex was great. They loved eachother back at school (though neither knew that the other was in love) and now they meet back up. I can see passion flaring in such a situation. |
Author Feedback: That 'reason' was actually a spur of the moment kind of thing. It wasn't planned, but it seemed to fit so well with the plot. I was just going to have Harry missing Hermione, not actually go to her. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! ~Aya |
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dhamon45Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/08/06
I swear to God, your Maya is a combination of Maya and Misato from Evangelion. You have Maya's name and the fact she is a subordinate, and Misato's inability to cook, but the ability to eat said cooking. I'll laugh if u tell me that this whole borrowed character thing was a coincidence. |
Author Feedback: Go ahead and start laughing then because I've never seen that anime (movie?). I actually based Maya's character on one of my friends who is completely incompetent in the kitchen--it's pretty sad actually. I would never 'borrow' with out giving credit where it was due, unless I forgot--in which case it's usually something small. I would definitely remember taking a whole character and would forewarn about it.
You said that last line as if you wouldn't believe it to be a coincidence...well, I don't know what else to tell you, I've never seen it. Never had any desire what-so-ever to see it either. It's one of those things that you hear is good, but it doesn't sound good to you and you don't want to take the time, kind of thing...
Sorry if you don't believe me...thanks for reading! ~Aya |
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Ah quite an interesting tale that Harry gets Hermoine back into his life because of his Mother's own diary that was found in a library no less. Brilliant can't wait to see what happens next in this tale. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Don't you just hate it when things are just practically under your nose. I figured it would be a good twist! ~Aya |
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AWW good STORY!!! i love it i love how shes a lawyer i can just imagine her being one like w/ SPEW and everything hahah is ginny in this story? or any other person? well update soon!!!
PS i love H/Hr and u made it worht reading about them!!!
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Author Feedback: I got the lawyer idea easily. I just imagined if Hermione hadn't been magical what would she do? Dentistry? --Probably not because her parents are Dentists and she kind of has a need to be nosy and help people. A lawyer she could defend, research, learn...etc. If I can ever get a chapter out I'm sure there will be mentions of Ginny.
Thanks! ~Aya |
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i like it so far. but harry seems a tad on the rough side... i don't know. not enough written to know for sure yet. i'll see in the end.  |
Author Feedback: I think that's just the way I write Harry. For some reason in the books he seems too...non-rough (I don't want to say anything that would offend anyone). He's good rough! ~Aya |
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oooooh I love this fic. I think I have read it before and it caught my eye again today. I can't wait for more! |
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brilliant story. and even though the sex was a bit fluffy, especially with the goddess thing, it was still gd and not to early at all. please update soon! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 18/07/05
wow that was great i love all of ur stories i really want u to hurry up n update lol |
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i can't believe that i missed this chapter when you updated... it was great... post more soon...
candice |
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I really love this story. Please update soon. I really like how you added the thing with Lily and James along with the relationship between Harry and Hermione. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/05
Hi, I just started the fic and am interesting to know why Hermoine is going to London. But reading the first chapter I had to comment on the legal apects of your fic. It seems that reading your fic that you don't know much about the legal system aside from what you read on tv. As an attorney, I could not help but point out that Hermoine cannot represent Joann against her husband in the divorce or anything else since Hermoine represented the husband before. Since it would a conflict of interest of a former client, she cannot go and act almightly and help out Joann and her daughter even if she wanted to. The whole thing of the breach of contract and fine print is just wrong when it comes to representing a client. The other legal apects of the fic are a bit inacurrate as well. I don't mean to put your story down or your writing but if you are going to write about a particular field you need to be more accurate and do some research. |
Author Feedback: I believe I stated a couple of times that I'm not a lawyer-that I don't know a lot about law and I don't appreciate you criticizing me for something I clearly stated. You could e-mail me going into detail about what was inacurrate, but don't just tell me it wasn't right and not say why-okay, so you did it for the first part 'a conflict of interest'--she could go before the judge saying that it was against her morals to defend him I'm sure! I'm not writing professionally-I do this in my free time, which I don't have a lot of, and a lot of authors don't research what they write about--at least I tried. To be completely accurate I'd have to have taken classes to have really done my research. More importantly it wasn't even a lot of 'legal aspects' in the story. ~Aya |
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AzusenaUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 12/05/05
I liked it, kind of confused me when he knocked on her door though, I couldn't figure out if she was still in England or not.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 12/05/05
I liked it, kind of confused me when he knocked on her door though, I couldn't figure out if she was still in England or not. |
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missmonetUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 12/05/05
great so far but when are you going to continue your work. I love how you combined James and Lily with Harry and Hermione brilliant please post soon.
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