I will def. be reading the sequel. I'm glad you decided to write one. Excellent.

Great story. I enjoyed every minute, keep up the fantastic writing.

this is good but you should DEFINATELY go back a make revisions to your punctuation!

I really did enjoy this.It was truely a great fanfic. I cann't wait to start reading the sequel.You are a great writer.

hey i really like this. i dont think ron would ever betray harry or have anything to do with draco malfoy but its really good anyway!

I like what you've written so far, I think it's good. I don't know if you're open to constructive criticism (if not than read no further than this) but reading the first part of this fic you've given us a scene with almost no build up and almost total climax. I know some like to keep their readers on their toes, but I think you should try and start more in the middle, where you started leaves the reader confused about exactly where they are in the story and doesn't allow us to start the fight rooting for Harry. It just seems you need to flush out your first paragraph to a couple of scenes at least, that's way to much information right before we jump into a battle. Also I didn't see myself having any empathy for harry, that could be from where you started the scene, but also it seems that you're almost writing an artical. You are just showing actions, I don't know if that's just the POV you wanted to use or what, I (the reader) want to know how he felt when he laughed and I don't want to be 'directly' told. It's called showing not telling. It makes the reader feel something for the character and also makes it seem as if we've arrived at that feeling ourselves without the writer telling us what to feel. Sorry if I've gone on too long, or if I have offended you, I didn't mean to (this is my first review here at portkey) so I'm not exactly sure. Let me finish by saying I really do like the story you've written and can't wait to see where it's going.

Laurie

Hey, how is he supposed to be an auror if he can't do magic???
~Stephanie
Padfoot makes it all better.

I just had one question, but now that it is the end of the Epic, it really doesn't matter but oh well... How do you pronounce Gaia???
~Stephanie
H/H

Congratulations on this very good story , the only problem I noticed was that the two most important battles (Harry/Voldemort, Harry/Slyterin) were too fast , but I really liked your plot .
Please don't get me wrong, I'm not flaming you, I'm just...teling you where were your mistakes so you can improve your writing.
I've been reading your stories for some time and all I can say is that you just got another 10 from me!

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Great fic, great job developing the characters and adding your own touch to them.

Bad are short chapters. The examples of your betters, follow you must. Guide you the force must. Guided by the original writer you must be.

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Weasley
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Please use spell check; I love the story but the numerous little errors can get kind of distracting.