This was a cute little snipett and I like the way you cooled his arder. My only problem is that being an old man and knowing my gender I can not see him backing down so easily especially after being permitted to go as far as he did. I liked it and thought it was a nice little fiction.

I like how you did this. It was passionate but also so them, with the finishing of each other sentences and trusting each other so much. Course I always love seeing Harry lose control.

that was a very very very good chapter....cant wait to read next....GREAT!!!

that was a very very very good chapter....cant wait to read next....GREAT!!!

OH, MY GOD! that showed some hormones, huh? I liked it, very... intimate. That's good though, It makes a story more... interesting.

I loved it! It was awesome! I mean I can tell this is going to be good! Real Good! Wonderful story!

wow i love the fact that you like stargate sg1 and harry potter
harry+hermione
and jack+sam
are my obsetions
you should watch roswell on the scifi channel as well that has a lot of interesting parings.

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

Really good chapter. I hope you continue with this story! I can't wait to see what happens

Very, Very Sweet and Tender! Too bad its only one chapter Because I want More! Please! Please!

Loved it!, the description of him teasing her was really great hehe.

Can just imagine them sitting there and him not keeping his hands of her.

3 thumbs up!.

i liked the story

nice

That was pretty exciting. *nods head* Yep. That was pretty exciting.



Animagus-Steph