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Great story. I really like the style and flow of your writing. The plot was a little predictable but you more than made up for it with your writing. In fact, in some ways it was actually a strength because without a complicated or intense plot to obscure your prose, it was able to shine as the true focus of the story. |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 17/10/06
Hmmm... this was rather ridiculous and cliched, I have to say. still, I read it and I suppose I should leave a review behind... |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/06/06
Ahhhhhhh! OH the angst  So painful  Very well done  ! Hope it all works out > |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/06/06
Ahhhhhhh! OH the angst  So painful  Very well done  ! Hope it all works out > |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
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HHr4evrSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/10/05
I love this fic so much...I think I have read it at least 5 or 6 times. I just read the last bit over again because I wanted to add this to my favorite stories. |
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I love the ending! This fic brings back so many happy memories of hopeful times.
In the aftermath of the Half-Blood Prince, I've been going back to all of the Harry/Hermione fics I bookmarked. I must say, this one is just as great as I remember it to be! I noticed that you haven't written anything in a while, and that saddens me. I loved all of your stories and I hope that someday you'll come back to write more. |
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Ahh, if only they would get their act together already! Their serious denial is so funny, yet so depressing. I love how what you write is so detailed and realistic. The lines, "Harry stared after Hermione, watching her brown head bobbing in the distance. He sighed, running a shaky hand through his raven hair," really shook me up. It's rare that an author is able to capture a moment so beautifully. Can't wait to see how this ends! |
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I had forgotten how touching the line, "You're simply beautiful," had been.  Looking forward to reading the rest. |
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bobozaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/06/05
Hey, what happened? When did Ron grow up. I thought he was supposed to be the eternal child. Well miracles do happen. And the TRIO is a trio again. Ain't it wonderful. It's also funny that both Harry and Hermione went to Sirius..er, Snuffles. Nice, sweet story. Good job. |
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bobozaSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/06/05
They can be so blind sometime. Everyone knows how they feel but them...and Ron. Maybe Hagrid can talk some sense into Harry. Now who's going to talk some sense into Hermione. Parvati tried but she wouldn't listen. What now? |
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bobozaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/06/05
Ooooo...he's in deep. But we all know that. Just when will Harry and Hermione learn it. Ron needs to just get over it because they (H/HR) belong together. |
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That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in life when you can.
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This is great hope you can keep up the great work and I hope you enjoy your self when you write. |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in life when you can.
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