Owww that was really sweet!  I like it, keep writing fluff similar to this, some of us really enjoy it |
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That was a fun little story, I like the part where Sirius made the bey with Remus. |
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SpeedzSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/09/05
Lol i like the bet thing at the end. Highly amusing. Good work, me likes. |
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ahhhhhhh....
if only it happened. it's a pity jkr always had h/hr scenes interupted by ron or harry's idocy.
oh well.. the seventh book is our last hope.
the bet thing was good, used a lot but always good! |
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hehehaha. cute. yeah- its a lil late 2 review a\`n all- but i rele did like it! |
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answer42Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/10/04
I love the awkwardness. I'm so insensitive, laughing at Harry for his 'problems'. The "C-c-can I kiss you?" part gave me butterflies.
Sirius at the end is priceless I really like fics that have people betting on relationships. Personally, I think Sirius would have been a little more shocked, but that's just me. Honestly, Harry's so clueless. He really needs to be smacked upside the head sometimes.
I think this is more of a missing scene than an 'alternate scene'. But I still can't see Harry in a healthy relationship. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/10/04
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/04
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/04
u suck asswhole, dickhead, bitch,jackass, piss ant, crack baby, horntoad, retard, mother fucker....... |
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ZeeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/07/04
Hmm not that bad. =)
I like the ending.
But it surely could've been longer.
I've read one of your other stories and I must say that you can do much better than this. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/07/04
lol i thought the ending was good, are you going to update this 1 or are u leaving it as it is? |
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meagUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/04
i knew a part of him wanted to make hats!!  thanks for doing this and going against jkr  great job! |
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jembodawgSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/04
Great ending! Best damn part of the entire fic, if you ask me. |
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MatthiasSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/04
Ok Ok this was an alright fanfic but i have seen better. |
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