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An Order of the Phoenix Alternate Scene

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hplove_dgch
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/02/08
Owww that was really sweet! I like it, keep writing fluff similar to this, some of us really enjoy it
 

DTeezie313
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/09/06
That was a fun little story, I like the part where Sirius made the bey with Remus.
 

Speedz
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/09/05
Lol i like the bet thing at the end. Highly amusing. Good work, me likes.
 

wannabeawizard
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/05
ahhhhhhh....

if only it happened. it's a pity jkr always had h/hr scenes interupted by ron or harry's idocy.

oh well.. the seventh book is our last hope.

the bet thing was good, used a lot but always good!
 

footballstud
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/05
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Remus`sweetie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/11/04
hehehaha. cute. yeah- its a lil late 2 review a\`n all- but i rele did like it!
 

answer42
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/10/04
I love the awkwardness. I'm so insensitive, laughing at Harry for his 'problems'. The "C-c-can I kiss you?" part gave me butterflies.

Sirius at the end is priceless I really like fics that have people betting on relationships. Personally, I think Sirius would have been a little more shocked, but that's just me. Honestly, Harry's so clueless. He really needs to be smacked upside the head sometimes.

I think this is more of a missing scene than an 'alternate scene'. But I still can't see Harry in a healthy relationship.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/10/04
Someone must really like strawberries!!! That was a good story and keep up the good work. Can;t wait until you continue GFT!!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/04
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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/04
u suck asswhole, dickhead, bitch,jackass, piss ant, crack baby, horntoad, retard, mother fucker.......
 

Zee
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/07/04
Hmm not that bad. =)
I like the ending.
But it surely could've been longer.
I've read one of your other stories and I must say that you can do much better than this.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/07/04
lol i thought the ending was good, are you going to update this 1 or are u leaving it as it is?
 

meag
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/04
i knew a part of him wanted to make hats!! thanks for doing this and going against jkr great job!
 

jembodawg
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/04
Great ending! Best damn part of the entire fic, if you ask me.
 

Matthias
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/04
Ok Ok this was an alright fanfic but i have seen better.
 

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