Lily's reaction to Jake seeemed a bit young for her. Those are some pretty mature words regarding romance for a girl who may not have yet hit puberty. However, it was a nice fluff moment, and it was one that was cute to say the least.

Now that was cute Only complaint, the ever present "Lily" or "James".. at least you put in two other names.

This was so adorable!

Cute and fluffy isn't all bad. I find it completely believable that Harry would be more terrified of his 10-year-old daughter than Voldemort - he's had more experience with Voldemort than 10-year-old girls

That was so cute. I love it, I can just picture Harry trying to explain the way of life to his 10 year old daughter, hmm, so funny. Keep up the good work.
Bye,
R. Cortazar

aww... it's so cute and soo sweet... i wish you have a pic of lily..

Very cute. A nice bit of fluffly fluff.

And Lily is always what I'd thought Harry and Hermione would call their daughter.

LOL. Oh so cute and so fun!!! I love that!!
The way Hermione tricked Harry is just wonderful and I just love little Lily!!! :-)
Thanks for that. What a way to start my day!! :-D

Aw. This was just adorable!

SO funny! Tricking Harry to do that was so very "Hermione". And I'll bet Harry's face was priceless
Anyway I loved this story! Fluffy and funny all rolled into one. Keep up the great work!

Hilarious! I out-right laughed until someone came in my room to check on me! Bloody funny!

hahahaha!!!that was sooooooo funny!!Is there going to be any more chapters?
Well that amused me so thank you!
Sofie

Grin...that rocks!

oops, I keep forgetting to rate in here....

Btw, this is listed as "in progress". You planning on continuing this? I'm gonna keep an eye out for this, then

Wow oh wow! I'm ROFLAO!!! You came up with this in less than 2 hours??? You made my day! I was catching up on boring accounting stuff. Didn't want to read the newspapers after glancing at the depressing headlines re politics and whatnot.

Thanks not only for putting up this wonderful one-shot, but also for doing it so quickly!

When I read Lily's "Well, I certainly hope he recognizes me" line, I did think that "isn't she too young to be thinking that?" Not just because of her implied interest in Jake. The words "certainly" and "recognize" strike me as being rather big for a 10-year-old. But I suppose kids are growing and learning faster than we give them credit for.

Then I read about Hermione's ruse. That was so unexpected and so funny!

I wonder, do you have kids? I'll bet you'll pull the same trick on your hubby -- poor him!

Pumpkin Pie Fluff RULES indeed! See ya around! I'd love to see you around Portkey's forums, too. There are mature discussions in the H/H Pumpkinpie's Army forums. Bye for now!