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I love this! I don't see how this is pumpkin pie fluff though, but I love this! The end especially and how their daughter says ' she sent u to talk to me about sex?' sooo funny... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/03
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spazUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/03
hee hee hee |
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BeppoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/03
*ggggggg* It was great!!! "heands on lesson..." very good!!
Beppo
Bon, germany |
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Apeman_Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/09/03
Ver nice. I just read an angsty WIP and it left me feeling a little down on a cliff hanger but this perked me right up. |
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awsome loved it very cute nice and fluffy , more please....*holds out her hands , as if waiting to be givin a second serving of fluff* Ok udate this story soon i'll be checkin back |
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AutumnSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/09/03
Very cute and fluffy, but don't you think it's a bit unlikely for Hermione to tell her daughter about sex "two years ago" (which, if I read correctly, would have Lily at eight years old)? Kids might be growing up faster now, but I just don't picture Harry and Hermione's daughter as having an interest in boys like that at ten.
All that aside, I liked how you made Hermione trick him into it. The whole Harry thing was very IC. Adorable.  |
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NAPPAUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/09/03
awesome, but I was looking foward to more grafic in 'the talk' between Harry and Hermione but oh well, I'll give you a 9 |
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ErikaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/09/03
aww that was so cute and funny lol
great job |
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*blink blink*
do I need to say anything more? You ROCK!!
*loads trucks of pumkin pies at your doorstep* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/09/03
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This is so Hermioen, Ron, and Harry-like.
Cheers from the pie!
Maria |
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HEhehe . . . that's my girl! Good job, always nice to see Hermione using the ill-begotten skills Ron and Harry taught her.
Cass |
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lailaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/09/03
awwwww |
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That was funny, are you planning on cotinuing? I sort of doubt it, but you really never know... |
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