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Sakurakessho
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/02/03
It's a really sweet story. However, some of the japanese is not right. For example:

hontoudesuka?

it should be written

hontou desu ka?

and it means

really?

the way you had it written seems like you are trying to say what is it?

what is it? in japanese would be "nani yo?"

i'm sorry if you think that i'm telling you what to do or anything...i'm just pointing out the error.
 

legolas
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/01/03
really good job
 

clarabella_21
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/03
I must be feeling fluffy.(Sighs)
 

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