Hey excellent story so far! I was wondering if you were ever going to update or finish this? A story like this deserves to be finished because it has all the potential in the world. Until next time!

Always,
Sara K.

Also, people should realize that portkey.org is a h/hr; r/ll; j/l; g/dm promoting fanfic/fanart site.

arrgh... This part got cut off my second letter to Claire:
After 8, I meant to write:

8 is less than 13.

Well... now that my reply to Claire Bear has been dealt with...
Bloody awesome!! I love it so far... I hope you update soon because I really can't wait. Although your story isn't really as exciting/adventure-filled/somewhat angsty as I usually like, (but this is just my taste, other people probably won't agree with me, so don't worry. ^_^), I really love your writing style, and it totally overrides the other stuff. You have such a nice, clean way of explaining.
Well, I hope we can see Voldie and his Nibblers (aka D.E.) soon... =D (hehe) And some scenes where people really realize that the second war is upon them... dun dun dun...
Looking forward to your update!!

Another thing I want to add to my "letter" to Claire Bear:

Why are you reading this??? This is a PG-13 story. As you, yourself, stated, YOU are EIGHT years old. Didn't you say that yourself? You EMPHASIZED that even though you are only eight, you could write better than this fic's author.
Hello??? 8

Another thing I want to add to my "letter" to Claire Bear:

Why are you reading this??? This is a PG-13 story. As you, yourself, stated, YOU are EIGHT years old. Didn't you say that yourself? You EMPHASIZED that even though you are only eight, you could write better than this fic's author.
Hello??? 8

Dear Claire Bear,

You know, claire, if you are really as smart as you say you are, then you would have known that the best way to criticize someone's fic would be to give SUGGESTIONS and CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM that criticizes certain points and explains why you're criticizing those points. FLAMING will only make the person immediately see you as an enemy and ignore or outright reject your criticism.

You should also have known that the best way to prove your worth is to actually write a good fanfic of your own. Then if you are really that intelligent, then your fic would get tons more positive reviews and recognition than this fic. Merely stating that you have skipped a grade, and have gotten straight A+'s proves NOTHING. For all we know, you might be lying. (which I am inclined to believe that you are lying.)
Moreover, stating such things make you seem extremely pretentious and arrogant. (which are both bad characteristics to have, if you didn't know already.) Also, I, myself, have skipped TWO grades, and I have also gotten straight A+'s. But, even though it's true, when I review a fic that, I think, needs improvement, I don't flame and say that I am sooooo much better than you because I've skipped TWO grades (muwahhaha) and I've been getting straight A+'s. This will automatically make the author ignore what I'm about to say. Instead, I say, I think this specific part needs work in this area. Perhaps doing this would improve it. Also, expand on this part by adding more description of the scene so that the readers can picture the scene in their heads. This will make the story seem more realistic and make it far better. (or something to that effect.)


SINCERELY,
electric_aurora

*stands and claps* bravo i loved what you said to that Claire. I congrats on winning that knowledge bowl competition. Stupid kid, may i ask win you are going to put Harry learning the new curses from the new Dark arts book he got in Knockturn Alley because i know Harry would at least try to learn new things to help defeat Voldemort. Update soon and nice going again on telling off that brat Claire since this is portkey where people come to read fanfics of Harry and Hermione getting together along with Ron and Luna. This is a site for like i said H/Hr fans and i think you should of said that to Claire too. Am a big H/Hr and only read H/Hr but i like R/L side ships but as long as its not that much and mostly H/Hr. and i took too much of your time and my time. Once again nice tell off and update soon

so i guess you will no longer continue this huh? oh well. it was getting really interesting.
melissa
acoustics1220

good chapter! now i want more! hurry up with the next update! its a crime to with hold good fic material! i'm glad hermione took the initiative! what else are they going to talk about after that snogging session? possible dating? or just, what homework haven't you done yet? lol.
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com

same as the other chapter and it was even worse than the first

bla blaa this was the most boring piece of shit i have ever had to read i could type better stories in my sleep!

okk I just want to say one thing ... Ginnys is not ... i repeat not a skank.

also ReportLyric Seasoning did u look at the date on this story? it hasnt been updated for 3 years and was published around the same time....... the 6th book wasnt out then how tf would he no about that then

ok people you really need to get a life. ur all sitting there dissing this story, almost every review i noticed is unsigned/anonymous cuz ur all a bunch of sissys who think you no what ur talking about and dont want anyone to no who u are. DID YOU EVEN LOOK AT WHAT THIS WEBSITE IS????? ITS FANFICTION!!!! dont review saying it sucks and he shudnt pose as jkr he never was. also, look at the heading on the website. THIS IS A HARRY/HERMIONE SHIPPING FANFICTION SITE! IF U DONT LIKE THE IDEA OF THEM BEING TOGETHER GO TO A DIFFERENT ONE!