Well done!
Keep up the good work!
Will the whole story be from Rons POV?

excellent story so far! i read the companion piece (from Snape's pov...i think it was called "To the Headmaster"?) and it fit nicely with this one........gah, ron's digging such a hole for himself, but i can definitely see him doing this sort of thing from the way you're writing it. keep up the good work and please update soon!

why arent you updatin?? Dont let any ronniekins lover get you down!! *what are they doin here anyway, its an h/hr place*

i like the way your writing it...the story is different and different is always good!!

dear proffesor granger.
I have just read the last of chapter 4 and think that if harry, ron and hermione are in seventh year @ hogwarts, you should read the fifth REAL harry potter book again... because if you havent noticed, SIRIUS BLACK DIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
duh! well gotta flash! bi

proffesor granger
after reading your story iam inclinde to say that your predictions for the new harry potter story's will be imposible to be published. in J.K Rowlings books ron could easily made bad but that would complitily rouin the book.

after taking much thought to this story i would have ratted it 0 but their wasent one. if you see from my point of veiw your story was absoloutly ridiculus,you ugly bitch fartfac . like think about it ,Harry going out with Hermione imposible for is hermione and ron it is kind of obvious that they like eachother when they fight it just a way of getting eachothers attention in otherwards flurting. and if you didn't know you stupid gay ass bastard fartface and i am being nice. you story was absolutly reatarde and gay. and infact if your the reatarded gay ass looser that rote this story then go fuck your mom and grandmother at the same time.you ugly fester dued gay ass looser fart ass bitch face.goodbye i say to go scru your gradmother.

Dear Proffesor Granger.
I think that what happens to Ron in this story could very well happen, but if J.K. Rowling actually did so, I'm afraid she would ruin the books, especially by focusing the book on Ron instead of Harry.Also, I doubt that Harry gets Hermione... I mean think about it! Ron and Hermione are always bikkering with each other (that is a sure sign of getting each others attention and also of flirting).Also, Ron has always been jealous of Victor Krum as Hermione's boyfriend! So according to your story, she is basically cheating on him! I mean wake up and smell the coffee! Didn't you see it coming from a mile away?
A sincere fan,
Kestrel Krum

Very good so far

I think it is very well written, although I don't think Ron would ever turn to the dark side. He is Harry's best friend, therefor he is supposed to be very loyal to Harry, you were recommended though, and I like the way you write, so, on with the show!

Awesome story. I love where you are going with this. I hope the next chapter comes soon. Thanks for the fun and excitment.

ok i am worried what will that ecuse me frinch basterd ron do.poor harry he will have to face more hurt

i never really could picture ron that way...he always seened to me a bit dim and funnyish. it's a bit saddening to see him be the next pettigrew. but maybe it won't turn out that way? there's going to be more chapters, most likely, so i hope the next one is coming soon.

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evil ron turns me on haha

once again, brilliant writing oh great one

now i want to know what happens next

get on that

NOW

Nice piece of work, I liked the the darkness and spookyness of it. and When Ron replies to that Dark Lord, it send shivers done my spine.

Very dark, and well thought out. Very interesting

meow, i love it when people go dark