AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/11/09
that's a good starting! I love naughty harry! Definitely want to read more! Update soon pls |
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AriVilJimSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/11/09
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MayaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/11/09
Hey, I was just wondering if you are updating this story soon - I am just curious about what will happen next! |
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ahuahau he IS really out of character!!! but well i like it... he's really flirty goshhhh, who would say he would have the guts to turn back and aske her on a date? Our harry would never ever have that guts to do that so... bluntly...
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Hmmm, I sense a good potential out of this, and trust me, I got an eye (or two) for this thing... keep writing, and a little more caution on the grammar won\'t hurt either
Looking forward to it |
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well it is exciting i love post-DH and totally au and this looks like a pretty good au story my dear, a bit rushed during their date, i mean you could have used a lot more dialog there and show why harry is all those different things but i'm sure you'll take your time next time, please keep up
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This was utterly fantastic! I am really excited to see where you take this fic! Few gramatical errors here and there, nothing to fret about. Can't wait for the next one, hope you don't keep us waiting too long. |
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Interesting start, let's see how you develop the story. H/Hr are my favorite couple, can't wait to see the next chapter! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
I think that you have something really good going here, LOVE this version of Harry, and best friends with Draco!, and having his parent's alive, and sirius, remus, ect...
PLEASE! PLEASE! continue with this, I'm very excited to read on..until next chapter. when you continue how often will you be updating?
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
love this keep going! please keep going with chapters and make harry work for getting hermione and don't let her get swept up in harry! |
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missmonetUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
oh please tell that harry dose not uses hermione to get what he wants. i hope that hermione sees his "game" and teaches him different. i want more of your story. |
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MayaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
Wow...at first I didn t know what to expect when you said ..Harry was very arrogant and full of himself. But I have to tell you that your story rocks!!
There is something about it that just draws you in. You have to update soon because this might be the best plot I have read all year.
Props on that!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
It\'s great!!! Keep it coming. It\'s got great potential!!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter. |
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What a promising little chapter!!! Loved the beginning. I was a little taken aback when you said Harry was out of character, ladies man and etc, but it wasn´t exaggerated till now like I see around here many times. And I liked that.
Hope you post the next chapter soon!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Yes, I just figured people should know that he will definately be different, what with having grown up differently - then no one could have a go at me for having an ooc Harry. Glad you like it |
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bvc17Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/09
love it already! i absolutely adore the interactions between harry/draco and harry/james/sirius its just how i imagined them to act when harry got older. |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Me too, I liove Harry and Draco as friends, because it just seems so wrong, and yet so right at the same time xD |
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