good story so far!!! i'm excited for the next chapter  |
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SiddiqiSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/11/09
Definitely an intriguing premise you have here! Although the diary thing has done, it is good to see where Harry and Hermione don\'t actually have any sort of relationship at the beginning, brings something new to the story that you don\'t see all that often!
Glad to see the longer chapters as well. Nice attention to detail, which really helps with the first person perspective you\'re using. Normally, I think this lacks as people forget minor details and fail to mention some key parts that puts the reader in the story, none of which, as of yet, you\'ve done. I compliment you for that.
I loved your last story and it looks like this will be no different. Keep it up!
I.R. |
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Ok, I'm really liking this story. It is very different with Harry and Hermione not being friends or anything close to at the beginning.
Until next time,
Candice |
Author Feedback: Thank you! For some reason I like challenging myself with these stories. God only knows how messed up I'll be in the future. |
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Hmm. Well, this\'ll be interesting. Will they soften just a touch, or complain about each other to each other in their next letters? |
Author Feedback: Lol we'll see...  |
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I like the way you're setting up sympathies. It's pretty clear how the letters will likely continue, but don't cut it short as it'll be fun to read anyway. Now I can't wait to see how they meet. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm glad to hear that I'm kinda pulling it off =] |
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gglol1615Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 18/11/09
i liked this chapter and how u ended it but watch out for grammar cuz there were quite a few in this chapter. |
Author Feedback: I'm not surprised. I was really close to missing my dedline so I didn't go over it as many times as I usually do. |
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Harry!!! hehe, I hope you update soon enough, I love it when Harry and Hermione hate each other but then fall in love lol... bye! |
Author Feedback: Lol it holds a sweet spot for me as well  |
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mmm. im excited for this. its a fun concept. update soon please :] |
Author Feedback: Thank you, I'm glad you like it so far  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 17/11/09
LOL i love the stiry so far i can't wait for more. i absolutly 100% agree with ur disclaimer.
loving ur other storys too can't wait for more there either. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much! I try to change the disclaimers every chapter to something funny and/or witty so I'm glad my little spout of boredom strikes your fancy |
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CandraSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 17/11/09
Did I mention that I love your Hermione?  I guess I have a thing for nerds. The part about everybody having a favourite shower temperature was hilarious
They write 10 letters a day?! Wow, Harry and Hermione have really clicked as Pen Pals. I couldn't believe that Hermione didn't even lecture Harry for putting of his homework.
I'm so looking forward to the next chapter: The first in person meeting since they became Pen Pals. I wonder if one of them will mention their Pen Pal.
Oh, you're a Twilight fan, too? I'm obsessed with Twilight! Edward is the only book character who can give Hermione a run for her money when it comes to my favourite book character. Okay, Edward has probably won, but that's only because I'm female and straight. You've got tickets for the premiere? I'm jealous.  I was too late to get tickets for the first show our cinema offers and only some for the 25th.
Do you write Twilight Fanfiction, too? |
Author Feedback: Lol, you may have mentioned it once or twice. I took the shower part from my own experiences. I HAVE to have it scortching my skin, even in the summer. It's weird, I know. But that's just me I come up with my best ideas in the shower, so it's worked thus far.
I know, I know. Big boo boo for Hermione! But she's too wrapped up in her first real friend her age, so cut her some slack. She'll get back to normal soon enough.
Hmm... maybe maybe not. Lol I can't really say much without ruining it.
DUH!!! I  the books to death. But unlike most of the Twilight fanbase, I love Jacob wayyy more than Edward. Yeah, I know, it's a crime. But he just appeals more to me as a person, friend, and fuck buddy  That sucks about your tickets! There are 4 theaters playing it at 12:01, 12:02, 12:03, and 12:04. I have the 12:03 thicket while the rest of my friends have the 12:04... yeahhh I need to hurry up and exchange that
No I do not. The reason being that Twilight is focused all arounf love and romance and Harry Potter is more centered around the action with only a tiny hint of that stuff. Plus, in Harry Potter they got the pairings all wrong, so naturally I HAVE to correct them. But yeah. Love the books and movies, but will never write fanfiction for it. |
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kinikeensSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 17/11/09
Well its good to see you writing again! Can't wait for the next chapter, i didn'-t realise it was au until the end of the first chapter lol, however nothing beats a well written au! |
Author Feedback: Thank youuu It doesn't really sound like an AU at the beginning unless you're really looking at the smaller details. I'm sure the flashback cleared that right up, though. Hehe. |
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superramacUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/11/09
LOL. That's funny. "This is NOT what I need right now." I love this story, I've been waiting for DAYS for it to come. I've literally checked this story every day since the last post!
Keep up the great writing |
Author Feedback: Wow, I think you totally just earned the coveted title of SUPAFAN. I'm so glad that you like the story that much as to check it every day. I've done that with a select few stories here on Portkey, anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I know the feeling and sometimes when the chapter is posted and you're not-so-satisfied it can be a big let down. So I'll try not to let that happen! |
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hahahahaha, oh no! who's that person now? lol who???
Neurotic? who? me? noooo... Hermione Granger is totally noootttt neurotic lol
How is she physically? I mean... she's seveteen now... |
Author Feedback: Hmmmmm I wonder
Physically? Well, I dunno really. Maybe I'll have her look in a mirror next chapter and help describe it. But she looks basically the same as canon!Hermione except maybe not as lean and mean because she hasn't been around Harry, Ron, and the adventures they get her into. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/11/09
Great job! I can't wait until you update again(hopefully soon) |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I'll get the next chapter up this weekend |
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Duhn duhn duhn. Potter.
Can't wait to read more. Reminds me so much of You've Got Mail, which I just rewatched. Love it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I've only seen parts of that movie, so hopefully I'm not subconciously taking major plot points from it and using them for myself. |
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