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Tidings of Comfort and Joy

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Jessy Black
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/08/09
Loved this story so far.Please continue writing this great story, I´m so curious of the events to happen next.
 

gal-texter
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/01/09
Forgot to add: you can edit the chapter title fields by re-posting the chappies. You probably know the procedures already, but in case you don't, they're on the Fanfic FAQs -- "How to edit stories without losing reviews".

Chap titles can be simply numbers too like 1, 2 and so on. Makes it much easier for us readers to have those show up in the dropdown menu.


 

gal-texter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/09
Hi. I was randomly looking over reviews when I saw brad's comment about the empty chapter dropdown box. I think that's because you left the title field blank in your Upload Chapter screen. You can put something like "Chapter 1" in there so that we readers would see them in the dropdown menu.
 

brad
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 12/01/09
Weird how the chapter listing drop-down box for this story is empty ... at least the 'next' and 'prev' links work.

In re-reading this I admired again your/Harry's observation that Ginny had no arguments - not one - for why she should have accompanied the Trio on their horcrux hunt. Mind you, Rowling *did* try to nail that option shut with the sudden introduction, at the very end of the series(!), of 'THE TRACE'. Had Ginny accompanied them then the Trio would not have been able to cast spells in her presence, supposedly. I'd like to think bad of Ginny for not insisting she accompany her - *snigger* - 'soul mate', but maybe that might be a bit unfair of me.

After Hermione's slamming on the brakes on her new relationship with Harry I was unsure as to whether, in fact, that relationship actually existed ... or if it was still in the proto-formation stage. So I was relieved to read this chapter and see them walk hand-in-hand, kiss some more, notify Luna that they were a couple and also state same to Matthew Granger. Very good.

I'm a bit confused about what the evil Imogene did, and how much the other Grangers know. Presumably Michael, for example, doesn't know that Hermione is a witch ... otherwise he'd be jumping up and down about it, magic and the like. But if Imogene is such a snake as you/Hermione have portrayed I would have thought she would have blathered everything to every Granger in the place, either before or after she chased Hermione out - HERMIONE IS A WITCH!!! MAGIC IS REAL!! HER PARENTS - OUR BROTHER/SISTER - WERE KILLED BY AN EVIL WIZARD! If Imogene could go off her nut in rage at Hermione then one would think she'd also be equally likely to blurt out the facts to all the other muggles.

Maybe you could have mentioned a 'compulsion spell', some sort of secrecy charm, placed on the letter that Imogene received? Hmmm, but Mr. Granger, being a muggle, couldn't have cast such a protection. I don't know. I'm pretty sure, from what Hermione's cousin said - or didn't say - that it's all still a secret, that only Imogene knows that Hermione's a witch, but I can't see a reason why she'd keep the secret.

Setting up Ron/Luna I see ... sounds good to me!
 

AnotherMioneFan
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/01/09
Not a bad start. Can't wait for the next chapter.
 

the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/01/09
A really nice chapter - I liked how you brought Hermione and Harry together and then made the announcement of their relationship such a straight-forward, easy declaration. It was also interesting to see how you dealt with Hermione's muggle-famly members. It seemed that you could 'feel' the interaction and it was a nice read as a result. It was believable - I didn't have to struggle to see the conversation in my mind's eye.

I'm looking forward to your next chapters!

Regards,

the_scribbler
 

Mike
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
Gee, this is a really sweet chapter. You can feel the love starting to blossom and grow. I'm glad that Hermione will go back to her family. Great job!
 

Mike
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
Gee, this is a really sweet chapter. You can feel the love starting to blossom and grow. I'm glad that Hermione will go back to her family. Great job!
 

Ravenclaw's heir
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
Oh so sweet! I don't know if I had reviewed before but if I hadn't lovely story, can't wait to read the next chapter, let's hope aunt Imogene behaves better
 

MissLexi
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
Awwww... yay! I'm glad that she isn't going to have to cut ties with her family and I love that she is gonna hook up Luna and ron. Great job.
 

morriganscrow
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
Well, it looked like the treacle tart worked!
Very nice chapter with a lovely Luna cameo, and some tidbits leading up to a nice potential bit of angst at the Grangers.
I look forward to reading it.
 

harperkidzmom
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
Cute fic. I like how Harry has helped Hermione get through the loss of her parents. Also, love how Luna knows American Football.!
 

Looney Warner Mouse.
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
that was a lovely chapter to read.
and Happy New Year.
I am watching some football now.

wondeful story.
excellent plot line.
please continue it.
I am looking forword to the next amzing chapter.
Harry and Hermione are wonderful for each other.
but right now it's time to go,so till then have a real good week and weekend.
cue Portkey Pig.
Portkey Pig" Tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!"
and me.
Looney Warner Mouse" Good Monring and good after noon and good night and good luck!".
input cartoon soundtrack.
fade out to black.
the end!
 

frostykist
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
very cute story, i like it. Keep up the good work and update soon. thank you
 

kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/09
This story is getting better and better every time I read it!I love it! Keep up the fantastic work on it!
 

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