A flipping good story totally turned into crap. What with your brain? did you ever read the Harry Potter books or what. If you are going to use Malfoy then do so and place the story in the right place. Do not ruin Harry Hermione stories by putting that prick in them.

Why is it some good stories are ruined by putting Ginny and Draco together. It is such a stupid pairing that it drives me mad. No Weasley would ever dream of being with a Malfoy, they are sworn enemies with totally opposing beliefs, Take a tip and dont use such a stupid pairing in future work.

the last line of this chapter made me laugh
Gen

so cute i love it
Harry's so sweet! and Luna makes me laugh
Gen

Aww lovely story!! Very sweet and hot at the same time

aww this fic is really nice!! i wish you'll make a sequel for this

aww this fic is really nice!! i wish you'll make a sequel for this

It was an amazing end to an amazing story! I can\'t wait to read on!

..........Gah! I am soooo loving it!!!! Can't wait to read more!

This story was so beautiful...I loved it! Please keep writing more H/Hr fiction!

I was supposed to mention this earlier but I LOVE the Hermione talking to herself. I must be weird but I wish I could interact with my conscience or brain like that. I like that this emulates all the things I would do for a woman...

wow. beautiful. i really can't justify how good that was to read. great writing!

Winner! Still weird how draco and ginny get together...I never understand the basis for their pairings but that's not important. What's important is that Harry and Hermione are having fun and getting closer! Thanks!

Leave? You jest...jest. She can't leave...Harry will GRAB HER, he just will. Great chapter.

owned...she's just getting beaten left and right. she hasn't really won any arguments/discussions so far. there another score for wins/losses for who wins in the conversation. so far it's like harry 7 / hermione 0. great chapter again!