LOVED THIS. I love angsty stories, and the entire 2d chapter was so well-written. Well done!

You're right, this is something that JKR would not write! And yes, you did improve on it! Love the POV.

Wow. This is seriously one of my favorite short storeis! Great plot, agnst, ending, everything! Well written I loved it

This was so well-written! Good job!
I love the description and the amount of emotions you formed between Harry and Hermione.
Though I think I would have liked if it wasn't a happy ending, lol.

C'etait wonderful!

I'm too lazy to sign on.

But it was such a good read. I'm going to click the next button now. Too excited to sit here and write a good review.

Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us. I absolutely loved it!!! I love the way you write, how the story flows perfectly, how you manage to make it so believable it was almost like I saw the scenes play in my mind like a movie while reading.

I am really thankful for all the effort fanfic authors put into writing these stories. And thank God there's fanfic, because honestly I still can't get over the Hermione/Ron Harry/Ginny ending of DH. I so wanted Harry and hermione to end up together, dammit!

Okay, enough rambling... thank you again and keep up the amazing work!

P.S. Sorry for any mistake, English is definitely not my mother tongue as you have probably guessed.

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

this fic never seize to amaze me.. ever since the first time i read it

Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! They finally got their act together... that was hot! Did I mention yay? LOL

Awwww... poor Harry - I don't blame him for being confused.... and poor Hermione to think that someone couldn't want her that way and to hide herself away from getting hurt. Great job.

That was perfect!! Your writing is beautiful. If you're with someone who truly loves you, it can really be like that every time! Amazing story!

Oh that was almost cruel. I do hope the next chapter provides some kind of catharsis, or better, a happy ending! Hee hee

ooh, I like it. I like them together, but I like the "strain" in the relationship. Going to next chapter! :-)

Great story, but you shouldn't call JK an idiot. It's her story, not ours. She only invited us into her world, and we should respect her decisions.

much better ending. yay, happiness. so what was the book?