I'd say you certainly nailed all of your goals with this one. I loved it, how it was sweet and sad all at once, and how Harry, Ron, and Hermione are clearly still close-knit. Ron in particular has my appreciation here; it's hard to imagine how tough the situation must be for him, yet he seems to be taking it well in stride, quite maturely. Congratulations, and a very well-deserved well done!

Interesting. I don't think I'd say it works completely, though. Even if Hermione isn't technically cheating - Harry is. That's the problem with the blasted epilogue. Somebody either has to die or cheat, unless it's treated as a hallucination/dream.

- Bexis

Awwww! *squeals*!!! That's so cute and I liked how it meant that Ron was mature and he didn't hold it against them. And how you mentioned Rose's hazel eyes to insinuate that they are a mix of their parents.

Whoa.

I can honestly say that I didn\'t see that one coming.

Intrigued.

Please continue!

"It's not cheating if she has my blessing."

HA! Okay, that's definitely the best line of this story. And what a story it was! Although, I do feel bad for Harry for having to go through the seizure thing. Not to mention having to hide his relationship with Hermione from Ginny.

In a sense, I think you accomplished your goal, although I guess it could be seen as cheating on Ginny since she doesn't know about it. But, other than that, fantastic story!

"It's not cheating if she has my blessing."

What the hell- What is THAT supposed to mean? That Ron knows? Ron Weasley, the same guy that had jealousy fits over almost everything at Hogwarts, knows and ALLOWS for Harry to have sex with Hermione?? The same character that you portray has a bloody bastard on "Coming Back Late"?

And is sex the only way to fight those spirits? And since Ginny can't know that Harry is the Master of the DH, the (only trusted) alternative is Hermione?

... Or did I get it wrong?

By the way, who's Rose's dad?

Another one of your Master piece
Loved it, especially the not cheating part.
Cheers

oh that was absolutely beautiful! it needs a prequel or sequel or something! fantastic job =)

oh that was absolutely beautiful! it needs a prequel or sequel or something! fantastic job =)

It is hard to read a story where they don't really end up together, but you were able to make it bearable with the Trio's friendship surviving despite what they've been through. This keeps me coming back to read your other story "A Deeper Love", too. Thanks for writing these.

Interesting view on their relationship. Very well written. I like the line about this not creating if she has my premission. Does that mean in this story, Harry is Rose's Father. That would be so cool. Anyway of making a sequel.

Is this story still in progress? I hope so, because this has a unique bent to it that I haven't seen anywhere else and I think that this story could turn out pretty good.

BTW - I love Coming Back Late too. Keep it coming!

-Patrick

Aaaah!!! I love it! I was wondering when he thought that she'd never cheat, but the confirmation was brilliant. So is his blessing good only on Remembrance Day? I assume so. Of course, Harry's still technically cheating on Gin-bot, but... I can't bring myself to care. The last question was lovely as well, given the furor that Albus Severus's name has caused. Then again, with this story it can be taken as a sign that Harry did as Hermione suggested and finally forgave the bastard(s).

Interesting...

You know, it's another instance where the Trio trumps Ginny. I mean, it's like, the ultimate instance, but just goes to show you. *smirk*

And poor Harry... it's just another instance of how he'll always need Hermione to save him, one way or another...

wow, that was... intresting way of putting it. I like that, but waht made ron soooo grown up to admit that and to let her be with harry? Intresting spin, i love it, awesome writer (will continue reading your ff's)!!!!!!!!!!!!!