ScoutSigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 12/11/09
I was never a fan of those Ape movies.
Fantastic chapter.
Is Arthur gonna be alright there with those fanatics? I hope he doesn't get hurt or killed.
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slickrcbdSigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 11/11/09
Ok, I thought Malfoy was going to swear a wizard's oath, yet he clearly violated the oath. Yes, it was predictable, and it's obvious that it was planned, but I'm surprised they didn't insist on him at least swearing some kind of oath. Or were they just playing on his prejudices by making him think they were that stupid with their gambit? It just struck me as off when they mentioned the oath.
That's about all I have to comment. The quotes from the Planet of the apes were obvious. |
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whoa that was deep.
Lot of stuff went in to this wonderful plot.
excellent work.
real top.
I can't stop reading all other story as well I am look for the next chapter in this one and ( The Time Meddlers) and Harry Potter McGonagall) please continue you them all please.
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
Tha tha that's all Folks! both Muggles and Wizards too.  so long .
Fade out to black.
But rember that it's all ways darkest be for done.
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TechnomadSigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 11/11/09
I _thought_ that speech looked awfully familiar. I was expecting that either Draco was booby-trapped or mind-controlled, but using this as a distraction to take over the Ministry made good sense. |
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ReyDunnUnsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 27/10/09
Holy crap. That's all I have to say. In the past 2 or 3 days I've read "More Important Than a Broomstick" and then this... It's hard to believe they're from the same author really. "Broomstick" seemed so plain and tame... then this pops out of frickin nowhere!!
I noticed you haven't updated in a couple months and it's taken you 2 years to get this far.... I really wish I didn't start until it was finished. I hate writing. Please update ASAP. It's so... holy crap that you have to keep going. I really want to know what happens. Does Harry decide to end all magic? How can half this stuff actually happen, Amelia Bones wouldn't have passed half of what she did? |
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From the start this story to me seemed to have a mysterious feeling to it and i am still awaiting to see the plot completely unfold to see if i feel that way in the end. As always your story does not disappoint. The idea of magic appearing out of another universe and the descriptions of the past in this story along with the twists and turns of the plot make it all the more enjoyable making it that much harder to not try and judge other stories i read against the ones you have written. |
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Okay, the story was fine until the latest chapter and the whole "Magic is too dangerous to exist!" bullplop spouting by Harry.... the fact is that magic is NOT too dangerous to exist, no more than guns, knives, etc. are 'too dangerous to exist'.
It matters in how they are USED and just because one nutcase uses them for evil or to kill other people does NOT meant that the thing in question is a negative in the slightest.
Frankly, there are other ways to stop Lucius Malfoy: 1. By killing him, 2. By oblivating him and setting him down the street as a muggle, 3+. Numerous other things. |
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What a chapter,wonderful,excellent,good.
I am look for the next one soon.
please continue all of your story's like
( Harry McGonagall) and ( The Time Meddlers) too.
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
Looney Warner Mouse " Good after noon and good night and good luck!"
 fade out to black.
The end! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 19/07/09
Oh and I just wanted to say that you should keep up the good work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 19/07/09
A bit of a... different... direction. Other than a few OOC characters, it's a definite AU. |
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slickrcbdSigned | Chapter : 21 | Date : 16/07/09
Nice to see an update. I don't recognize what this is crossed over with, if it isn't an original creation. It seems that neither side in Britain is worth supporting, and the muggleborns are getting caught in the crossfire. If it weren't for the issue of muggleborn children under the age of 10, especially newborn babies, I'd say they were better off simply leaving the country until Heinzel and the pureblood bigots destroy one side or the other, THEN attacking the victor.
Of course, letting the Prime Minister know what's going on somehow would help avoid him resorting to genocide. |
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 What! Molfoy Minter that's make's me mad  Poor Muggle-borns I hope that every thing will be ok soon.
I am look for the next chapter in this story as well your other one's too.
This so good to read this story and the others too, like ( Harry Mcgonagall) and ( the Time Meddlers) and this story called ( Harry Potter and the Muggle-born Uprising).
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
Looney Warner Mouse " Good night and goo luck!" |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 29/06/09
please make harry come back to life! please!
a a a a a a a a a a a a a |
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What's going on here,what happen next?
where is the next chapter of all the story's ?
I am looking day after day for the next chapter of all the story's like ( The time -meddlers) and ( Harry McGonagall) and this story too called ( Harry Potter and the Muggle-born Uprising).
please,please continue them all please!!!
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
Looney Warner Mouse " Good Morning and good after noon and good night and good luck!" |
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slickrcbdSigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 27/04/09
Hey! You killed Harry! You Bastard!
Well, that wraps things up. It's up to the rest of Britain to fix their problems. Ginny and her powerup seems like their only hope.
I don't see much about the current government that deserves saving. They want a war, and it looks like they will win simply because Heinzl is alienating away people that would otherwise support him. Especially with this last act. |
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