I've only just started this, but it seems really promising: stylish and sweet as always. Excellent work and thanks!

Lovely I like this little slices of married life being a married working mom myself. When the Aurors came to the door my heart dropped a bit.

Ok, a few things, and yes I had to make notes as I was going, because I adored this so much.

I adore how he calls her Mione, only he can do it because she dislikes nicknames and only in the most tender of moments.

I love how utterly beautifully you describe their coming together again, as it's not only perfectly articulated, it's bloody beautiful! Their passion and love completely shine through. Harry adoration of her body, Hermione's self consciousness slipping away. *sigh*

I love Hermione's note of how she always knew Harry would be the doting father, because he would be.

I love how you weave words - the way she fit against him that only came from years of sleeping next to him. Beautiful!

I love Harry's interactions with Emily, how he woke before Hermione to go check on her, how he watched in adoration as she grabbed the blanket. How he knew she was his and Hermione's... just brilliant.

The portrait of this family was heartwarming, gorgeously written and, I think, spot on. Well done!

I think what I like best about this series is the quiet moments, when Harry and Hermione are just laying together, at peace. They're so sweet together. Of course, the moments with their children come a close second. It's nice to see what their lives might have been like. As always, you've done great!

I just love these sweet little moments. Seeing Harry with the kids is a wonderful reminder of just how good life can be. Thanks so much!

Damn, this chapter made me cry. I'm glad there was a happy ending, because anything else would have left me useless for a while. Well done.

So beautiful. It's so easy to picture the two of them with children, small versions of their own intelligence and impulsiveness, respectively. And you do write Harry and Hermione so beautifully, even as adults. Thank you.

Yes you did good! when you wrote about Harry's feeling & thought's about when he came into sight of Hermione feeding Emily was just great writing! true to life moment!. they way that Harry feels about Hermione now has changed, but in a very good way! not only does he see her as his best friend, and lover, but also now as a mother, and the way he speaks about that is just so heart warming..

and after having a baby, and not being able to have SEX! for a while, then having the green light! sort to speak, it was true to life how Harry & Hermione took the bull by the horns .

BRILLIANT WRITING! & EQUALLY BRILLIANT WRITING! LOVE THIS STORY. UNTIL NEXT CHAPTER.

P.S. I would love to have this Harry as my Husband!

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that was really cute!!i really want to be hermione!!! or have someone like Harry eith me!!
Emily sounds like a very lucky and sweet baby!!! i feel so sorry for Hermione, having to slep to litle...but that's how the first months are...=S
hehe i can TOTALLY see Harry as an overprotective paranoid father!!! CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Malu D.

Well, *I* probably only know enough to fit into a thimble also, but I think that in all likelihood, Emily is only "the most unrealistic baby in the history of babies" to JKR seeing as how she couldn't imagine H/Hr together, much less with child, which is a really shame, as the fandom quote says, "Harry & Hermione would never have named their kid Albus Severus!"

H&H4EVA
Hermione Rae

That was a really cute chapter. I don't really know that much about babies either. It was very loving and i absolutely loved how much you showed the tenderness and passion and love that Harry had for both of his girls.

Thank you for this story and the time
and effort that you have put in to it.
Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy
your self when you write and have fun
in your life when you can.

Great Story,very sweet.

I'd love to see a chapter with Hermione seriously jealous, maybe back when they were dating even. Not so jealous where its angst, but enough to where it isn't comedy level. If ya know what I mean.

I love your updates!

Aww...Harry's become such a sap! I'm just messing around...that's a good thing! 4 months without being home is ridiculous though, guess Hermione was too tired to jump him. I hope there'll be more!

I remember when my brother - who is sixteen years my junior - was born, and I can tell you that I felt the awe and the worry and the deepest love. I empathised with Harry's tenderness throughout all the chapter.
So the only thing I can say is: I loved it!
Congratulations for this chapter, and I hope you have more like this up very soon for us to enjoy, despite the cavities!
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