God, where have you been?!?!?!?!??! I have been waiting for this for two years! Thanks so much for updating! PLEASE update sooner!!!!

I never actually read book 6 or book 7 (GASP). I got tired of the series since she took so long, yet I was always interested in the fanfiction. Then i found out about Harry and Ginny and never read book 6.

Book 7, I read the epilogue first and was disappointed, but opted to give the story a try. Got to where Hedwig died and I dropped the book and never touched it.

I eventually read the synopsis and I have to say, I'm glad I didn't touch them. They had to be the worst books of the series...and not just because the cannon, but even how the story panned out. I do hope you change the final battle... (I wrote my own battle scene and it ended up being more or less like Dragonball Z with Magic >.>)

ANYWAY, my point is, I'm glad someone is rewriting it...The errors are tiny compared to the story as a whole so who cares? I don't review too much, but this story is definitely shaping up to be good, hopefully you change more than just cannon near the end, if not, so be it!

Good job, keep it up!

I.R.

glad to see you're back...thanks for the update...2 years and i've still not found a H/Hr Deathly Hallows re-write...thank you, and i really hope you continue!

Really, really good. I can't wait for the next update, and more H/Hr

Yay! You're writing again! I've only been waiting like 2 years! Anyway, I like this sooo much better than the actual deathly hallows, I can't stand the thought of Harry and Ginny being together let alone Ron and Hermione...so keep up the good work!

The best chapter so far. I like the changes to this point in the story.

Rick

Between the first three scenes, you have definite transition problems.

Overall, you do have character placement issues as well. One moment a character has left the room, a couple of moments later, that same character is somehow still present in said room. Also, you describe a scene to be taking place in one setting just before suddenly shedding some illumination that the scene has moved to another setting, without preamble of the transition.

This story needs to be edited.

Having that said, I'm still here. Why? Because I see the potential for this story to turn out to be great.

Rick

Well... that wasn't quite up to par, I think. It seemed as though you hastened to put this chapter together. Too many details were omitted. I think you hit all the high points, but the devil (and in this case the angel) is in the details.

Still good enough to hope it will improve, but I believe you must slow down a bit. Give more detail, let the story flow and see your way through the scenes better. Quite frankly, some of it didn't quite make sense.

Rick

Aw... you cut out the Harry\Dudley scene. I rather enjoyed Dudley coming to some semblance of his senses. Other than that, good start!

Rick

just a couple of mistypes: 1) it's Twelve FAILSAFE, not FOILSAFE for the book. 2) they become of age at 17, not 18. you had mentioned that harry was the last of them to turn 18. none of them are 18 yet.

and i'm really enjoying the hhr moments. though i nearly gagged as bad as i did while reading DH at the h/g scene. bleh.

Thank you, it is really good so far! Can't wait to read more!

I fully support ANYTHING that tries to the right the wrongs of DH. LOL! Except for the icky snogging scene, which I suppose there was no way to avoid, I enjoyed this rewrite. I hope you've got the next chapter ready to go soon.

I'm enjoying the story so please disregard any flames. It's your story, write it the way you want and don't worry about what other think. You can please everyone so you just have to please yourself.

Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.

I'd be very glad to substitute DH with your version, every time I see that book near the others, and HBP too, I have the urge to take them and fling them out of the window.

Your story has rekindled in me the inspiration to write my own version of DH. I had that idea few months after the book was out but never acted on it, now I think I just might. But, now that I think about it, it might be an even better idea to start from HBP. I might just rewrite them both, just like you are doing, following the same storyline but with small adjustments on the feelings/characterizations/etc. That way I'll be able to replace both in my collection

The added conversation was a great inclusion, and i m lookin forward to read the next chapter.