chelley83Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 18/02/09
while i liked the story i felt it was a little rushed...and there were too many exclamation points...to me that conveys excitement and some of the situations didn't call for that...i don't know what they mean to you but that's how i see them when they are used...and as for the rushing thing, well some just tend to go that way but i don't know, it just felt like everything happened too quickly...her forgiving them too quickly and jumping into a relationship with harry after not talking for over a year...sorry just my opinion...i did enjoy the story and i noticed that it was your first one and you did a good job for it being your first one...and you said english wasn't your second language so i take that into account as well...overall it was a good job though just a couple of things i felt didn't feel or fit right... |
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The story is really good so far. it also hooks you in and makes you want to continue reading. |
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Oh My God, do you know that I've been looking this fic like forever? I read it first at harrypotterfanfiction then after some chapters you seem gone!! what happened that you leave there without any explanation?? Arrgh, i;m so mad at you yet happy that i can continue reading this fic again  |
Author Feedback: Funny you should ask. Turns out it wasn't me posting it, but someone that decided to steal it from here and pass it as their own. It was a reader from here that noticed and notified me. I got in contact with their site manager and after many weeks of back and forth e-mails, they removed the story from the site. Many more e-mails passed between me and the person who did it, and he kept claiming that a "friend" of his had written the story and he was just posting it for her. It got to the point that he wanted to keep posting it and adding to it. It wasn't pretty, but I ended up getting my way. I'm happy you found it again, and I'm sorry you're mad at me. At least now you know why it happened. I usually post to three sites, here, livejournal, and fanfiction dot net. If you see them elsewhere, it most likely wasn't me! Besides, the story is finished here so that should make up for it!! Read the rest while you're at it.  |
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Absolutely Beautiful..I really hated how everyone abandende her, but you wrote it so beautifully.Two thumbs up  |
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aditivatsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/08
I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 03/11/07
btw you've been spelling quidditch wrong for the past likle 9 chapters...thought i'd let you know |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 03/11/07
k i'm absolutely in love with this story but do harry and hermione really call each other abe all the time, it's completely out of character and sounds really weird, love is okay, but baby and babe are not right, it's like saying Ron and Hermione go together, and we all know they don't! but it's a good story, except for that little bit. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 02/09/07
I really liked the story. You should keep writting more. |
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dexter19Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 29/07/07
really great fic after HBP and Dh i wonder what hermione and ron had in common other than having harry as their friend. ron's pig headed,brash,drooling idiot with a intelligence level of a one celled micro organism.
glad harry and hermione found love in each other. some times i wonder why JKR ruined such a good plot after OOTP |
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Swim17Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 09/07/07
I love how she calls him "babe." It's so sweet, and romantic. *Sigh* I want a boy to call babe. Man. |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 04/07/07
Awesome !
This fic was great ... absolutely amazing !
Keep it up ! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 23/06/07
that was good , continue writing awesome cool things with harry and hermione |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/06/07
U jumped quick 2 the love part, didn't u?? I usually don't like it when ppl jump so quickly 2 the "love" part of the story and I think u mite have 2 soon but imma keep readin 2 see if u smooth it all out and worked it all 2gether!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/07
Great beginning to a story...u truly know how to write. It's got me wanting more and that's what u wanna hear!!  |
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hermioneUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 21/06/07
i was in tears of joy when i read chap 9,10 n epilogue...
it's so nice n touching...when i read it..pls haf more... |
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