Wow Great Re-imagining of the storys I lookforword to the nest installment.
As I do most of the time I will rate this story with a number system but will hold off my total untell the second installment is finshed.
Story 10/10
Characters 10*/10
Drama 9/10
Romance 10/10
Concept 10/10
Sub-total 49/50
*I give a 10 for the Characters although I sometimes dident agree with the way thay where pertrayed. But as I have no ideal the person harry would be in the story had it gone this way I can only say I beleved this Harry would do any and all the things done.*
Thus Untell Next time
Yours Truly,
Faith In Snape

Okay I don't know if I've already reviewd this chap, but who cares?

this chap was brilliant. I just read it for second time and I just couldn't stop reading.

I liked the graveyard scene so much...and then when Voldemort took Hemrione as a shield. (I only say: Accio Granger slut, I don't know why but i couldn't stop laughing at that part).

Okay I could go on and on how brilliant this chapter was (not to mention the whole story) but It's getting quite late and I'm really tired.

So at last: PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE hurry up with the sequel

i love this story very much. It is one of my favorites.

I have been with this story from the start, I have agonized over the time frame from chapter to chapter, I\'ve reread it... I do like this story. It\'s such a new angle of the \"someone aside from the Dursleys raise Harry\" plot. Usually it\'s the Weasleys, or Sirius or something. Once it was Bruce Wayne!

I\'m curious how you\'ll treat the publicity Harry\'s bound to get now... maybe have him sue the Prophet for unjustly printing stuff about him? I\'ve read many fics like that, I love those. Technially it\'s an invasion of privacy...

PLEEEASE don\'t take too long with the sequel, I\'m dying here for it already!!

Great chapter overall! Though I thought it could have used some editing, and it felt a bit rushed at times. Nevertheless, the unforeseen twists and turns more than made up for the shortcomings.

Only a bare few Harry and Hermione scenes in this chapter, but of those that exist, I enjoyed. Although this particular scene did not encompass the both of them, I especially delighted with the 'Hermione swearing in worry scene'. That was hilarious!

As for the whole of the story, well done. Great story! I found it to be quite unique and well worth the perusing. I was a pleasure.

I look forward to the sequel. I do hope it's just as great.

Rick

I can't wait to see how you continue this story. I like what you have done so far. Keep up the good work.

what is the second chapter called i want to read it
it rocked

Outstanding chapter!!!! Will we be seeing the angry Harry we saw in book 5 and 6???? Will Umbitch be showing up or will there be some other Ministry monkey shoved off on Hogwarts???? Will this in any way change anything between Harry and Hermione???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!

Three guess's at who was the one who wrote the last line and who was reading it that lying Bitch Skeeter

this is awesome! you have everything fitted perfectly. i know there's more to it but it's like the crack of dawn and i'm so sleepy it's not funny...

anyways! i'm enjoying this so far like it's a good old novel.

Wow! What a wonderful story! I really liked the ending. I guess that this means Harry is going back to Hogwarts next year and we'll pick up form there. You really write well and put together a marvelous story! Thanks so much!

This has been a thoroughly enjoyable story. I appreciated several things including:
*The change of venue, with the feel of the original tournament without exactly duplicating it.
*The lack of explicit details of the snogging
*Brianna was a joyful addition. I'm so happy she invented the overboard on her own.
- I'm sure there are more things that I enjoyed, but these came to mind.

your totally right about dumbledore and his broom.
And how you could use the brooms to bypass the chess set.
However, Grubbly-Plank was primarily a care of magical creatures teacher, not a grounds-keeper. Just quibbling. Interesting idea about teh hyphenation, though I must say- "Grubbly" just sounds creepy, like boils or other ick. Grubbly-plank sounds just strange in an earthy practical way.
Again, quibbles. Nice chapter.

cool pranks- that is, the ones on Snape and Filch. Hermione bullying and blackmailing Malfoy and Co was just uncomfortable. It was just wrong.

And THEN you made the first-year, 11 year old, who hadn't even been having quidditch practise or any training DO A WRONSKI FEINT??
Come on!?
Next year will he take on a hungarian horntail, a basiliski and voldemort- at the same time- with only a toothpick?!?