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Interesting story that I feel compelled to share with you:
I was driving for 7.5 hours today and more than once I found myself struggling to stay alert and focused on the road by blasting music, rolling down the windows, and thinking and sometimes when I think, I speak. It was the strangest thing, the title of this story, "Non Sequitur" kept popping up in my head and I found myself repeating the words rolling them around on my tongue, and I just couldn't drop it. Just as if I had a song stuck in my head.
Some how, I knew that it was the title of a fic, and I assumed I had read it before. I found myself searching for the story because I maintain that the best remedy for the figurative broken record (be it a song or a quote or a fic) is to get real intimate with the phonograph.
I realized I hadn't read this fantastic fic, but some subconscious part of me REALLY wanted to. I can't seem to make anything else out of it.
Yes, it's odd to relate this story, but I hope you'll take this as a compliment! Great piece! |
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That ending couldnīt be better actually  Loved the way you wrote about their kiss. Not totally predictable and with Hermione "in control" 
I had lots of fun reading it! Thanks a lot for sharing  |
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The first chapter was very very interesting  I will read the second one tomorrow cause itīs kind of late here and I can't really concentrate.
I really like your writing style. Itīs fun, light and you care about interesting details  |
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hphgloverSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/06/07
I loved it! A flirty and fun Hermione is something I really enjoy. And I love Luna and Ron together. Thanks for such a sweet story. |
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lemon5225Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/05/07
this was such a cute story! i love the witty banter between harry and ron and harry and hermione, you write them really well. i really enjoyed this! |
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JimboCOUSSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/03/07
Nicely done. You did a great job of developing mature characters here, while still capturing Harry's essential cluelessness  Good stuff! |
Author Feedback: Glad you liked it, cheers  |
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looking forward to reading more of your fics soon as i've really enjoyed reading this one. keep up the good work |
Author Feedback: Thank you  Will endeavour to get them up soon. |
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MmeFleissSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 05/03/07
Loved it! You captured how I've always imagined the adult trio to act. |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much  |
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So I'm sitting here reading and I pulled out this old favorite. I can't believe I can't find my review! Maybe I reviewed anynomously(sp?)...
I really, really like this fic. The way Hermione teases Harry at the end of the first chapter...playing with his hair, getting into his personal space, it's GRAND.
Harry is so hilarious when he's totally clueless and flustered! LOL.
LOVE IT!!!
hmmmm, do you have anything new coming out? I'd love to see that!
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Author Feedback: Hey Acoustics.
Thanks for the review, and the very kind words  I'm glad you enjoyed it. In answer to your question, my other fic, Ties of Blood and Water is still ongoing, and I have a Lily/James fic in the works, but I want to get that all written first before I release it.
Thanks again  |
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lauhallSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/01/07
I LOVE IT, sweet and fluff, and wow, I just love the way you wrote it, and the story, it was amazing, you did an excelent job. Congrats |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much  *beamsatyou* |
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jagfan21Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/12/06
I love how you showed the H/H relationship without giving us loads of background. You did a good job and I enjoyed the read.  thnx. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I was just kind of aiming for a snapshot of the moment, glad it came off well  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/11/06
Aww that was wonderful. Really well-written and descriptive...and done very tastefully.
^^streams |
Author Feedback: Thanks  Glad you enjoyed it. |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/11/06
Wonderful ending, tremendous dialogue, and cute plot. Only downfall was there needs to be more! |
Author Feedback: Thanks  It was only supposed to be a one-shot in the first place, the second part actually. I think I may just post up a couple more parts though, there seems to be a lot of demand for it  |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/10/06
Me again. Again!  I actually read this, um, last week I think - and somehow missed writing a review...but I can't remember why...  Never mind. I'm here now. Again.  OK. Seriously: I'm very glad I read this after it was completed because I'm sure it's more enjoyable as a whole - I felt like the proverbial fly-on-the-wall taking in the lovely ambling ambience of a friends' night at the pub. I also totally enjoyed all the verbal toing and froing. Another great read! Go you!
And Happy Hallowe'en!! (We don't actually have it here really and since it's an American custom, I'm assuming you don't have it there either, or even Ireland...so I'm just saying it for no particular reason... 
Cheers!
Janie
PS By the way, just need you to finish those other stories, okay? Thanks! Save me scouting for new, decent stories, you know, cause they they'll be right here! |
Author Feedback: I live in England, but we have it in Ireland as well  It's just not very highly celebrated here - but there's not many holidays in sunny England that are
Thanks for your comments, and your lovely, kind words  Your reviews mean a great deal, glad you're enjoying my writing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 26/10/06
Hey, great story, I really liked it. It was so much better than the usual, Harry and Hermione go to a bar and realize their feelings for each other bit- though i do love those, because you had the time leading up to the bar, and told about their lives. Haha, to sum it up, really good story  |
Author Feedback: Thanks  I've not actually read that many pub stories to be honest. Ones where they go to a pub, yeah, but couldn't draw on much to avoid cliches. Glad I managed to
Thanks for reviewing, pleased you enjoyed it. |
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