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i have to admit i'm not the fondest of harry's reason for loving her [her ability to just GET him] nor am i a big fan of heart-broken!Hermione
but nonetheless, brilliant piece, prose was fantastic as was your development of the plot! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/08
Please let us know if this story is abandoned or if you plan to finish it? |
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HHr4evaSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 20/02/08
great fic. i really liked it
you did a great job i writing |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 25/10/07
did you day you were leaving? OMG! but why? you write so well i thought this is DH's epilogue i'm soooo looking for! you know, i hate to see you leave but if it's for the better then i wish you luck. and if you are still writing, just not here in PK, please do let us know. such writer shouldn't just leave the scene :wink: |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 18/10/07
Who are you, Jo?! Hermione's horcrux was so true to canon I thought for a moment it was actually copied from DH. And that sapphire is just the sort of half-clue in which JKR specializes. Even your writing style sometimes reminded me of her. Well done! |
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NariSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 13/10/07
Did you say last story? why? you write so well! This was a really great story and I really like the character development. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 13/10/07
That was a wonderful job at this fic. Very gorgeous. Poor Elizabeth. That's so sad that she was the one to break it off. They were both too noble for their own good. Great job at it. I thought it was quite lovely. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/10/07
Well, I'm really glad that I don't have to wait for the next chapter. Wonderful job at this chapter. Greay way of building the suspense!!!! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 13/10/07
Oh man, I forgot about hat party. Very interesting. I definitely need to re-read HP7. Lovely job. I absoultely loved it. Great chapter. It's so sad for Hermione. Wow, Harry is getting cold feet and mentioned himself and Hermione. Obviously he loves her. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/10/07
That was a really great chapter. I loved the flashback. I can't remember if that thing was in the book or not. I don't believe so. I just remember them saying they went down to the Cmaber of Secrets and Ron just copying Harry. Wonderful job. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/10/07
Oh no, this must be so horrible for Hermione.I have read stories like this, but it's always interesting to read. I think I've even read a story where it's Hermione getting married and Harry's the one who needs to regain her love. Very aweosome. It's very "my best friend's wedding" eqsue. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/07
This is quite interesting. I really love your description of words. Or the use of your words, so I should say. Lovely job at this. |
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this was beautiful, I loved it, every chapter, it was a great story to enjoy, thanks a lot! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 11/10/07
We can't read about their wedding?? Or anything that happens afterwords?? Hmmmm.....it seems that this story isn't really finished. Hopefully there will be a sequel. Hope so. Keep up the good work, and as always, god Bless!! |
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