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The World and the Way it Should Be

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gingercat
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/05/07
You can never beat Harry and Hermione and their children. Always a good story to read....never gets boring!
 

harry31
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/04/07
this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for your next story
 

acoustics1220
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/10/06
I like this!!!

Definitely a fic that I haven't found the same premise to. With all the same details...nope, very nice! I enjoyed reading this.

It was interesting how Harry wondered so early on what their child would look like.

I was definitely surprised when Ron and Ginny stood up for Harry and Hermione at their wedding. Pretty crazy!

cool one-shot
melissa
acoustics1220
 

stu14688
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/09/06
Being a product of divorced parents, I have to admit that I absolutely dispise divorce, but you did a wonderful job with making things work out good in the end. There is not bitter feelings between Ron and Hermione and Ginny and Harry, and I'm glad you did it that way. Very hopeful in a heart-breaking situation.

Good job! Keep up the good work and God bless you!
 

boboza
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/08/06
How wonderful! Just the kind of story that I love to read. Good job.
 

harry4NDhermione4eva
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/06
awwww! this was so cute i loved it, i actually loved this story it was so good! awwww i loved it! i can't stop saying that! good job its going into my favorites!!!
 

TogetherForever, H/Hr
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/06
Aww that is so cute! I loved it and I can't wait to read more chapters or even more stories!

*%* Susanna *%*
 

pippy0505
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/06
I really enjoyed this fic. It definitely wasn't all that surprising how Harry and Hermione spent a lot of time together after both of their divorces.

Although the time leading up to Harry asking her to marry him was for the most part nicely done (it wasn't sudden that he thought to ask her)...I think it would have helped if, like some have said, there was the 'desire factor' present. Possibly a stolen kiss or something like that and they both realize that they have feelings for each other - that it's more than just liking the company of the other.

Overall though, I think it was very nicely written. I liked how it started out with the reader only having an outside look at both relationships, but a few paragraphs in, we finally find out what's really going on behind closed doors. That definitely pulled me into the story.
 

AmericanMione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/06
Aww, very sweet. Ginny and Harry's issues seemed to be cleared up a little fast, but we all know we just want to see Harry and Hermione together. I liked the very even flow into their relationship. Very fitting for them. And the ending was adorable. Great story!
Author Feedback: Yeah, I know they cleared up a bit quickly but it couldn't be helped, I was a bit lazy I think. I'm glad you liked it though, thanks.
 

Anne U
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/06
This is a very sweet, enjoyable fic, though for such a short fic it covers a very long period of time and has a lot going on. The H/Hr relationship seems very matter of fact; Harry just one day realizes that he wants to marry her, even though it doesn't seem like he actually desires her, which is usually at least part of why people get married (speaking as someone who's been married a long time). IMO that's always the big knock against H/Hr by folks who don't "get" our ship -- that Harry has never known any hint of desiring Hermione, so he never will. Of course, I don't believe that. Anyway I did like this fic, but I think you could have amped up the desire factor a bit. I mean, even a single passionate kiss would have been great.
Author Feedback: I knew something was missing, but like I said it came from a dream and I guess I rather lazily wrote it as it was there. Thanks for pointing that out.
 

destroyerdrt
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/06
Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

Author Feedback: Thanks.
 

pandiesboxx
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
I feel like such a sap because I actually got a tear in my eye off of that.

What an icrediblely sweet and touching story. Simple, yet just right. And it seemed very real. My only quibble I have is all of them getting married and having children so young, but that's a problem that I have with all fics that do that even though I get that young marriages are probably the norm in the wizarding world. I just always want to scream at them "you're just kids! go live life first!" LOL! But alas...


Loved the story though! Loved it!
Author Feedback: Oh don't feel bad, your reaction was more than I expected. So thank you very much for it.
I know the young marriage thing... oh, I can't resist. I hate have them waiting for years for it to happen, but I have to admit, while I was calculating Harry's age for parts of this I was a bit alarmed to find that he was so young and already a father.
Thanks again.
 

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