YES HERMIONE HEXED HER IN THIS ONE!!! I have a feeling I know who the crazy Americans were. I knew Ginny was bad, love potion spiker!!!! Oh well its probably better that she didn't write H/Hr in the books. After seeing R/Hr its obvious that she can't write romance! What crap the last two books came out to be. I had actually had hope.
Oh well, portkey fanfiction is better then her crap.

ROFLMAO! Funnier than the first! "Harry gagged. He heard Ron laughing and Hermione saying, 'Shut up, Ron!' behind him." LOL Friggin awesome!

at first i wasn't sure if this was a h/hr or an hr/r (*gags*)god forbid.ummmm.... well-i-um? i don't know. there were some parts i really hated.
but it was nice.

Delightful and hilarious. If I ever get upset at the thought of Harry/Ginny, I'll just come and read this and laugh instead of get angry. Bravo.

KILL THEM! KILL THEM ALL! TO HELL WITH THE SQUIB AND THOSE FAGGOT R/Hr SHIPPERS!....

..cough.. um well anyways, nice fic, loved how you portrayed our favorite squib of an author. and the hell with her like I said, as long as we have portkey, Ship Harmony will live on forever!

Oh I loved this second part, though I feel bad about the squib *laughs* And I absolutely loved the part of "I'm so gay for you" lmao I can definitely picture that... and ron and luna... they made me laugh throughout all the story, the part about the fourthsome and the part about "who wants my autograph?" nice one shot!!

this one blew me away... your like fics are really funny and enjoyable to read... awesome!!!!

Wonderful! I love the conclusion. The rapport is so easy between all of the characters that it's like watching a live performance.

Magnificent once again. I'll definitely have to check out your other stories.

Thanks for continuing from 'Of Heartburn and Yellow Canaries' ... it's was a brilliant Part 2.

Take care,
Terri

That was great. I nearly wet myself for laughing.
Very well done!

Hotaru

Lovely ending. I loved it. It was quite hilarous. Loved Ron and Luna being in the fic. Lol...the Squib. Nice way. Quite dramatic whicn added to the hilariousness.

I got som'att ter say ter yeh...an' as soon as I can stop laughin' I will say it. Leave it ter the squib in charge to ruffle things up. She really is delusional that one.

A worthy sequel indeed. here are hundreds of fanfics the Squib should be forced to read. And perhaps it might help if she took to smoking TOBACCO again...

OH I love this! A perfect ending to it! I needed the laugh. Thanks for that. Long liveith HHr. Some day others will see the errors of their ways! (hehe)

And YAY A BABY!!!

Excellent sequel. You are a god(ess)! I think you've made me laugh more than anything tonight. "Eat me." Classic.

Ahhh! This is so brilliant!! I'm in love with it, honestly. I simply adore how much they curse, and Ron is so amusing! And Luna! Man, that Luna...*shakes head*

My favourite bit was the scene where Ronald and Luna are checking Hermione out. That had me cracking up...quite loudly and quite maniacally, which had people questioning my sanity. Though I have to question yours for coming up with this. Nevertheless, it's brill.

You better keep going, because I noticed that it said "in progress" which, to me, means there are going to be future chapters. And you better not bugger it up by saying that it was a one shot. After all, for such a long review, I deserve a new chappie, eh?

-Jackie

p.s. I loved it when the Squib gets slapped--teehee