Awesome! I hope your inspiration returns, because this is a really good story. Gook work.

Wow very interesting fic. The idea of Harry being an assassin and not willing to kill Hermione...I really want to see these two on the run. Hope you write more soon.

By the way: I, Estel Elendil, am the same person as Earendil Mithrandir. I just recently created an account. I am still working on my 3,000 word sample required to become an author, so it might take awhile for me to get back to you about my last review...

I know you have lost interes in this story, but I beg you to please continue it. It's great, with an excellent AU twist added in. If you're not going to continue it, I was wondering if I could use this plot outline for a story of my own, or maybe you could e-mail me the general plot that you had planned so I could continue it.

If you do continue it, please make chapters longer, with more plot, point, and H/Hr goodness.

Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! WOOT! Absolutely can't wait!

Good chapter! Will there be any interaction between Hermione and Harry in the next chapter? Well, I hope so.. Anyways, update soon.

this is good, I'm enjoying it. Definitely a twist and unique compared to many other fics.. I am very intruiged by this and hope you continue.

Yay! You finally updated! I've been waiting months for this.

It's really a shame that you've lost interest in this story, as it is such a fine example. I (and many of the other reviwers) would really hope that you continue it. If you do, please make the next chapter longer, and with more plot (this chapter seemed plotless and pointless).

I've also beem wondering about my questions that I reviewed last chapter. Am I right? Or delusional? If not you, someone else please help me... And also, when will the H/Hr start kicking in?

-Earendil_Mithrandir

omg pelase dont stop writing this story...its so different from what portkey normally has and it trully is a great story and having a different story line is kool so please keep writing beacuse i will always keep reading:!:!:!:!:!:!:!

I was wondering what happen to this story, this is really a uinque perspective to the Harry Potter world and I like it. Hope you do continue because it's good and can't wait to see more...

update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update yahoo!!!!!

IF IT HELPS ANY...I THINK YOU HAVE A REAL TALENT FOR WRITING, ANY KIND OF WRITING FOR THAT MATTER. AND THIS STORY IS A FINE EXAMPLE OF THAT. I KNOW WHAT IT'S LIKE TO LOOSE INTEREST IN SOMETHING THAT YOU ONCE SAW AS FACINATING, AND THAT IT'S HARD TO CONTINUE SOMETIMES...BUT YOU'RE DOING SO GOOD AND HAVE COME SO FAR...HOW CAN YOU STOP NOW?

It's ridiculous that you've been abandoning such an amazing fic! Don't you dare wait so long to update again!

woah-
just came across this today and this was like...the most captivating fanfic i've ever read. it's a shame that your not all that interested in writing more because it really depressed me when there was only four chapters.
i was looking forward to the part where harry wil be put up to kill hermione.
oh and by the way, i can tell that you're like a really great author! just like the way you put it into context is amazing. is it what you do for a living because you should really consider publishing something if it ever came up.
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but yeah- great story! hopefully you'll update soon.
i'll add you to chapter alerts just in case :]]
good luck with your comic

OMG OMG OMG OMG >_<

I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU UPDATED >_< SOMEBODY PINCH ME I MUST BE ASLEEP!!!!!

On the other hand, I feel bad that you will not be continuing this anymore... After Trust and Betrayal I was really looking forward to this... Oh well =/

Uhm as for this chapter... Well I can't say much because nothing significant happened in it. I'm not saying it's not good, it is well done but it's too short.

Anyway, thank you for uploading a chapter and for considering this fan fic again

good luck with the Naruto genre