That was a wonderful, wonderful tale! It was well-crafted and well-written. Thanks so much for sharing.
I'm thankful that I only found this story now that it's complete. I don't read WIP stories because I never knew if the author could and would continue the story. Considering also the time it took you to complete the story, I think I would have Crucioed you each time you make me wait months for the next chapter
Your profile indicated that this was the last story you've written/completed. I wish you'd write more because you really are talented.
As for your view on HBP, I completely agree. The only thing I liked in the last two books was Snape's true story.