I have only recently registered on Protkey, but before I was an official "member," I had slowly worked my way through all of your stories. "Kissing Lessons" is one of my favorites, and I thought "A Most Advantageous Match" was charming and absolutely well done. You reminded me a bit of Linda Berdoll, actually, who has written a couple of Darcy and Elizabeth sequels that are complex in plot but also contain much more smut than Austen! I'm looking forward to reading "Scandal" as you write it. Please keep writing; you are one of the best authors on Portkey I have found.

that was....
that was...
uhmmm...
uhhhh...
t-that was...

totally..
totally...
totally....

HOT!!!


LMAO..

but all in all..
the stroy was absolutely fantastic..
it was brilliant..

this is so beautiful I really love your storys! Gratulation. It's fanfiction Amazing!

i really liked this story...and i like the way you write, thanks for sharing this with us, can't wait to read your other stuff...

This honestly has to be one, if not the best, Harry and Hermione fiction out there. It does have it all. IT has cute shy moments, anger, passion, everyting!

I love it

a truly great first chapter loved every word i look forward to reading the rest of your story

Ok, I love this story. The shyness, the tension, the anger. I'm glad someone wrote a scene where Harry finally blows up at Ron and tells him all the reasons why Harry should be the jealous one and exactly why Ron is such a git bastard for actually wanting the fame and fortune Harry has and not ever giving a thought to HOW Harry got it. Very rewarding, very satisfying. Excellently done!

This is most definitely one of the better stories out there. I found it on Fiction Alley, and finished it here, mostly because I can review here. I must give you my compliments - many authors can't pull of a story like this without being very lewd, or including a full lemon, which rather detracts from the plot, if you ask me. Though I'm sure that 'Mione wouldn't mind, what with those novels of hers! *wink!*

I look forward to browsing the rest of your repertoire, as I am sure to enjoy those stories as much as I have enjoyed this one.

TTFN
Rinn ^_^

I really like this story. It has both the drama and the happy ending that we all want and love. You did a great job with their love scene and I hope that you continue writing HHr.


Regards,

the_scribbler

i found this one fictonalley first and then you mentioned you had a portkey account so i decided to come here and check out your other stories...this has got to be my favorite website for fanfiction, anyways...i really loved your story and i can't wait to read more of your stuff...thanks for writing this story and sharing it with us also i needed to add you to my favorite authors list anyways thanks again

This is amazing! I love the fluffiness of it all. I also read some of your work in AAEF and absolutely love it. Fantastic work!

I have to say that this has got to be one of my favorite stories! It kept me entertained the whole way through! I have read all of your stories, and I am looking forward to reading more!

Well I love it. You're stories are awesome. Good job on this one.

oh come on! why did you make him stop at her knickerS???? it would have been more interesting had they went on!

Less sappy scenes about friendship, more scenes with the make-outs plz.