lnkmstr10Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/10/08
Such a sweet story. I think I almost choked from "squeeing" so much. Very good writing. One of my favorites of short fics  |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/08/05
That was really sweet, i wish you would have written more at the end though... like about what they say to each other after and everything... |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
I could have done that easily, but it felt right, for me at least, to end it the way I did. Still, thank you for your review. |
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Niljä DeeUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/08/05
Oooh I'm so sorry, my mistake. Never mind the comment about the typos then, after all you're English (or American, I suppose one of those two) and I'm Belgian so you should know.
You're very welcome
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Author Feedback: Oh, it's okay, don't worry about it. |
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Niljä DeeUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/08/05
Hekserij Vierkant - lmfao! I guess you literally translated Wizardry Square, or something like that? I'm actually Belgian myself, and when I read that you got me laughing out loud, really. I know the story's not meant to make me laugh but well. Elsenborn doesn't exist, bet you know that, but it doesn't sound very Belgian either. Anyway, hopefully no other Belgian or Dutch people will read your fanfic, lol. I don't mean to offend you or anything, it just seemed funny to me, sorry 
Blauwe Maan is a good translation though, sounds good.
Sorry but I couldn't help myself: "The feeling isn't waning and the familiar thrill of an anticipated dramatic encounter fills my stomach with something rather similar to butterflies." Two typoes, warning and similiar. Sorry, that's just me 
I really like the ending; some people will never understand that suggesting something is sometimes better than actually describing something, but you have. You've got a lot of fantasy too. Keep them coming
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Author Feedback: Yes, I was feeling dreadfully uncreative when I translated that. Hey, there's no problem laughing... Well, unless it was because my writing is abysmal... lol.
No typos, actually.
wane intr.v. waned, wan·ing, wanes
1. To decrease gradually in size, amount, intensity, or degree; decline.
2. To exhibit a decreasing illuminated area from full moon to new moon.
3. To approach an end.
sim·i·lar adj.
Related in appearance or nature; alike though not identical.
Anyway, thank you for your review. |
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Niljä DeeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/05
Good story so far, you really describe Hermione's thoughts very well. As I said before (I commented anonymously on Happy Chaos), I'm not a H/Hr shipper but I really like your style; it's also very, very nice to read a whole page without a single typo or other mistake.
I especially like the bit that is also in the summary:
“Each night, dreams of you would fill my restless mind. I never dreamt without you, be it happy or sad, calm or frightening. In every dream, you belonged to me and I to you. In every dream, you were mine. Until dawn, you were mine.”
Keep it up!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much.  |
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OMG I LOVED THIS. So much angst and then that ending.  Gah! Fabulous job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Gosh, I'm beet red over here. I can't thank you enough. |
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Great ending to the story. You did a great job on this story. Hermione deserved to get her man, lol. |
Author Feedback: Definitely! Lol, thank you so much! |
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Ohmigoodness, you were right about the angst in this story. I cannot wait to click next and see what else happens. |
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Brilliant, just brilliant, I felt for Hermione the minute I started reading this fic.
The way you write Hermione is just brilliant, very like JKR.
Please keep up the good work.
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Author Feedback: Wow, your words amaze me, Carrie. I don't remember when I've blushed so much!
Thank you! |
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LieSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/01/05
*applaud* ... a great happy end
Exactly the lovely, not too long, story I was searching for  
Thanks for posting
 Lie |
Author Feedback: Oh, I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you so very much for your sweet words! |
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H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/12/04
Very well done! I like the storyline although I can't really imagine Harry touring the world before his business with the Death Eaters is complete. I like see the strong Hermione though...which makes it much easier to overlook Harry's actions.
Isn't it great how fate intervenes and makes you miss that blasted alarm clock or makes you sleep in well past any time you normally would on any other day? She was fated to meet him that day...very, very well done. Not too sappy either!
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Author Feedback: It was rather difficult, I'll admit, making Harry go off, but that's how he wanted to come out. I must say, the characters I write completely control me, and I did as he told me to do. I loved... absolutely LOVED writing the strong Hermione. While I don't necessarily believe she will become an Auror, I believe she could kick-ass at it... even if she does have a bit of a lie-in every now and then. ;-D
Thank you so much for your lovely review, and I apologise for my late reply. |
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Cute, saaaaaaaaaaaddddddddddddddd, but, finally... it ended... better than when it started? Perhpas... without a kiss, properly, but at least it ended! |
Author Feedback: Well, I'm glad you liked the ending. You kind of worried me with the review of the first chapter. ;-)
I thought the absence of a kiss was appropriate, too. |
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He.. it´s sad... I´m sad... he´s not my Harry, U know... and she´s so miserable... it hurts! |
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He.. it´s sad... I´m sad... he´s not my Harry, U know... and she´s so miserable... it hurts! |
Author Feedback: I'm sorry it was disappointing. But they ended up okay in the end. |
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Wow! That was great... The sparkle in Harry's eyes thingy is really sweet... |
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