So, will this ever be given its happy ending? Neither Harry nor Hermione deserves to be in anguish for another moment, let alone forever.  |
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Niljä DeeUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/08/05
Oooh that's already much better. Now one of you MUST write a third chapter! Lol.
You know, this sounds more like the beginning of a very long story, than like a short one. Please give it a shot, I think it's worth a try.
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Author Feedback: I can only promise to try. I can't guarantee that we will have another chapter up any time soon. I'm sorry. |
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Niljä DeeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/05
Aww, sad. It missed something though, but I can't put my finger on it. Maybe it was too sad, too hopeless. Dunno.
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Author Feedback: Yes, I got that from several people. Much too sad and hopeless.
Thanks for the review. |
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LieSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/11/04
A very sad and depressing story ... But great work from both of you 
I'm waiting for more! Thanks for posting...
 Lie |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much 
The final chapter should come soon. |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/11/04
Good writing but way too sad, I don't mind angst but I need my happy ending. Didn't get it here. But the writing was nice, anyway.
hammergal |
Author Feedback: Thank you. The happy ending should come soon. |
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HarryluvrSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/11/04
This is really sad! Keep up the great work and write more! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! There will be another chapter up soon. |
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IvyUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/11/04
That is so sad!!! But don't you think they have unresolved issues? Why can't they talk again....they're still alive, right? What's keeping them from talking and getting back together? Or am I just too dense to realize that they have nothing to come back to? |
Author Feedback: They definitely do have unresolved issues. At this point, Harry, in my opinion, is at the point where he wonders if it's even worth it. Why should he forgive her?
Hermione doesn't think he will forgive her. He doesn't speak to anyone, he shows no emotion. She doesn't think he cares anymore.
Also, I was rather dumb again and made another mistake. I really shouldn't post a fic so fast, without thinking. This story will be resolved, hopefully very soon. |
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OOOoOOO, MY GOSH!!! this fan fic so made me cry!! I loved it!!! It was so sad!!! U did really well on writng it!! But u broke their hearts!! I could just feel how they felt by the way u descriped it soooo well!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!
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Author Feedback: Oh, you cried? I'm sorry! But we're very happy you enjoyed it. There will be a resolution to this, despite what I said about the second chapter being the final one. Thanks for reviewing! |
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Wow... Talk about a sad story...
You know what? You should make a third chapter... Love can overcome everything or so they say... Maybe a reunion chapter? Some time later...
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Author Feedback: There will be another chapter, despite what I said before. It should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing.  |
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And here I thought there was nothing worse to read than a fic where one or the other of H/Hr dies at the end of the war. Does a story with an end like this even belong on portkey?  |
Author Feedback: You know, it actually doesn't, and I was a bit dense for a while there and forgot. 
Never fear, there will be a resolution to the story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/11/04
I wish it followed Portkey's rule that they have to end up TOGETHER at the end, but I suppose it was well written. |
Author Feedback: As long as it was well written... No, only joking. There will be a resolution. Promise. |
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LyndseyUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/11/04
Ok now just one more chapter where they get back together, my favorite hero needs his woman in his arms. Please I'm begging you, I know how Harry feels actually well not fully i don't have a madman after me, but my ex made me feel like that when we broke, but anyways just one more chapter where the get back together. |
Author Feedback: I know how you feel, love, and you'll get another chapter soon.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/10/04
Not to bad I only wish that it was alittle longer |
Author Feedback: There will be another chapter up soon. |
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star_hh5Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/10/04
Oh...that's a very good first chapter....I'm not really sure where this is going to lead to but it rocks...and I love the way you portray Hermiones emotions...GOOD LUCK!! |
Author Feedback: Oh, thank you so much! |
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That was beautiful. I wish I could say more. But honestly that was wonderful. I almost never read one shots and usually never read stories not already recommended to me, but this was really great. The second person POV was incredibly powerful as was the setting. I wasn't reading this. I was experiencing it. I think I sound like I am gushing now but you deserve it. This is wonderful! I'd love to read more of your things..I hope there are some out there |
Author Feedback: Ohh, thank you so very much! I've never done second person before, so I was extremely nervous about it. I'm so happy you like it and thank you so much for reviewing.
About the one-shot deal... I uploaded it before my girlfriend asked to write a second chapter. There will be one more chapter, hopefully quite soon. Sorry about that!
I do have two more stories here on Portkey, Tortuous Moments and Happy Chaos. If you read those, I hope you enjoy them as much as you enjoyed this one! Thanks again. |
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