That was sad how Harry treated Hermione! I was hoping someone would have knocked Harry on his butt for such treatment of her! But thye got together so I'm happy.

The second chapter seemed kind of... forced, a better explanation such as a love potion, a premonition or even some kind of spell would worked a bit better.

Yea....painful to read... oomph. Hope the 2nd chapter makes it all better... >

Loved it ,Spectaccular just loved it ,Amazing jk move over there's hermione Potter in town and she kicking @$$%^_^%^&&*(&^@$#$$%$@@!$%^&*

i liked that one to and when i say liked i mean REALLY LIKED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was pretty good. By any chance was that song in chapter two "Rainy Day Mad" for the anime Sailor Moon? It fit in well. Congrats!

It was really good. How Harry liked Cho but then how he went to the train to stop Hermione, it was so romantic and it was like an old time movie. It was very good. The only tip I give you and not to take it wrong, is that if you write in 1st person always keep it that. There were some parts in the story where you said Harry POV and instead of saying I you said he. But otherwise that it was really, really good! Keep up the good work!

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the story was great keep up the good work ont your futur stories.

My,my, my... This chapter made me cry so much.... Unfortunately, I had a nosebleed while reading this, so I read it again, and the tears came again. Then I read it a third time, and guess what? I cried again.

THIS FAN FIC WAS SOOOO SAD!!! I LUV sad stories. I feel so sorry for Hermione, all alone with no boyfriend.

Cool, Asome, Wicked and the rest of the things in the story and more. Plot cool Million thumbup

It was very touching and but sad and angery at Harry because he was with Cho and lied to Hermione

aww... that was very sweet! you did a great job for this being your first time with a song-fic! very very cute!

this is soo sad... and it is very well written! i tried to write a song fic once and it went horribly wrong...