Very nicely done. I enjoyed how you wove that in with canon.

refer to the comment for the first part of the story; the same applies here. Story is a bit slow-paced compared to some of your others.

Hermione's boggart was clearly that of failing classes in book 3. Your stories are usually more consistent with the characters than this story; is this one of your first?

great story.. i like how you displayed hermiones boggart as harry.. i wonder what it would be now in their sixth year.. i doubt it would have stayed the same.. for all of them now that their older...

and way went off topic and i want to say that this was a really good story... it showed how their relationship built up to the very end..

kudos to you

I've read this story four or five times now and still love it. I like your version better than JK Rowling's Adding story to my favorites

Thanks for the notes of explanation at the end. That was thought-provoking and adds to my understanding of the story. The whole story was very well done and I am touched by the sentiments you brought across with this fic. Thank you.

Wow, that was wonderful, as usual. I love how you wrote Hermione in this, being very affectionate and emotional when it comes to Harry. Really like this very much. Leaves me wishing there were more scenes like this in the books. Thank you!

This is a nice story, I like how you used Hermione's boggart, and I like how Lupin was trying to keep her from facing the boggart as well.

awww i really liked this fic it was really well written it was funny in bits and then sad it was really good keep it up

Wonderful!! Just awesome. Thank you for writing this, it made my day. Going to read the rest of your work right now.

Cheers!!

Thank you for this story and the time you have put in to it and your others.

It really was what I wanted to read, exactly the kind of relationship Harry and Hermione should have. And it is real and different from the other fics because it is based on some facts from JKR's originals.

That was good. I like that ending. It was kinda mean of Harry to trick her like that, though. I like how her love saved him in the end against LV.

Wow. That was tear-wrenching at times and giggly-happy too. Grrr, playing with our emotions! I seriously thought Harry was going to die...*sniff* But I'm glad you didn't kill him off. I loved the line where Harry asked Hermione what was to ridiculous...made me smile =) Lovely fic, lovely emotions.

good chapter hope there is more, just wish harry would realize his feelings for hermione