This was so beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. It was a pleasure to read it. keep up the awesome job!

Tanja

i got shivers... it's... wonderful. I feel bad for Ron though, but the story is great. I love it
you're a good author.
keep it up
-megz-

I really love the story. Is there a sequel or to make it longer. I really want to see how their lives would turn out. More conversation about how they love each other, miss one another, their unborn child, something like that.
But hey great story...

Wow, it was brilliant, especially the reflexion of Harry about his child. Do you think of writting a sequel?

i wish this wasn't a one shot. grrr, if only i twould be continued for 1 more chapter or something....i like this though. something just a bit different than everything else. just alittle bit different.
thats a good thing
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com

Hey!

This story is a keeper. Can't wait to read more of your fics.

Great job!

Wow. Just wow. That was very beautiful. You really captured a wide range of emotions and made me feel what the characters were feeling. One of the best H/Hr fics I've read in a really long time. Fabulous work. Really. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Wow, that was a great little story. At first I thought it was going to have a really sad ending, like Harry was going to die or something, but I was really happy to find out that he didn't and that he will hopefully now stay with Hermione. Great job!

I'm running out of positive comments to say, so I'll just keep it simple, lol. I loved it! I loved every single sentence of it. Great story!
xXx

Wow. Really, that was really such a sweet story! I loved how you described how Harry defeated Voldemort, and how you put in the detail about how they couldn't use their wands. And the part where Harry killed Voldemort with the swords of Gryffindor and Slytherin? Yeah, that was such an awesome idea! I love the details you put in here, and the last part was from Harry's POV and the first from Hermione's. I really enjoyed reading this!
Fantastic job!!

I was very impressed with your story. I love H/Hr together. I like Ron but everyone (JKR included) needs to realize that he is NOT the one for Hermione. I just don't see Ron holding her hair back while she is sick. You did a good job of showing how much they really love each other in a short amount of space.

That was a really good story good job your ending was good.

Wonderful. Loved the story. I am a sucker for a little bit of angst then a happy ending.

wow...thats really all i can say...wow...very good...truly toughing...i loved it!!! that was great....good job

Yeah - I had to read it again after I got your response. It's been so long since I read it the first time that I couldn't even remember which story it was (I read PK stories like popping M&Ms - had to go back through my review history to find it).

Yep, still like it. Still think it's sad and fabulous at the same time. Feel a bit bad for Ron, but he'll get over it.


And I'm glad you like my work too.