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The Unknown Waltz

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AUDRIEL
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/09
Wow this brought tears to my eyes. Just so wonderful to think that the best place to be is in love!
I was just wandering here in Portkey when I tumbled into one of your stories because of Bingblot saying your Writer's Block inspired her to write one of her fics. But I think this fic is way more beautiful, more awe-inspiring.
I also want to ask your permission to use your paragraph that starts with "I knew I had learned an invaluable lesson for life...". My youngest brother is getting married in October and is looking for a beautiful quote in his wedding invite.
By the way, we're both Filipinos. He's residing in the USA now while I live here in Dubai, UAE.
The Unknown Waltz is the 4th fic of yours that I've read but it's my favorite so far.
I noticed your last update of your fics was 3 years ago. Why did you stop writing? It will be so sad if you give up for good
Author Feedback: Hi Audriel.

First of all, a million apologies for not responding sooner. I can claim real life as the cause but that would be a little white lie.

Actually, there's a better reason.

Click on the following:

http://fanfiction.portkey.org/index.php?act=read&storyid=8401&chapterid=&agree=1

Or better yet, just go over to portkey.org and check the new and updated stories list. You may find something there you'd like.

Thanks for your review.

Gil

P.S. I hope you're over 18.

P.P.S. Of course you have my permission to use the paragraph you cited. My congratulations to your brother ... I think that point was floating around in my mind somewhere in the last few weeks ...
 

lolasail4
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/05
It was so swett, I almost cried lol. Very well written. It was a beautiful story!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/10/05
This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read!

Thank you!
 

Lady Starlight
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/05
I was just going back an reading some of your earlier work...

*sigh* That was absolutely beautiful. And all the reasons why they belong together.
 

Reachfulhp88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/05
holy mother of fanfiction! that was spectacular! what wonderful language and style! LOVED it!
 

LittleCreek
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/11/04
Really very good. I love Harry's realization and the description of him taking her home after the battle...

lovely
 

Copper
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/10/04
I don't like original characters, but I like your use of Dame Rivers as narrator.

I don't like 'children' fics, but I think you used Catriona and Elise perfectly. We know their parents love them, but more, we know that Harry and Hermione never lost themselves and their relationship.

You used the music and the dance and that line, 'You're a great wizard, Harry' in the most lovely way.

Thank you for this story.
 

Blissfully Absent Minded
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/10/04
This story is so beautiful. I love that it's related through the memories of others and is directly from Harry and Hermione. I read it all the time. It's definitely on my top ten list.
 

eMeRaLd_eYeZ
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/09/04
This has definitely made me crying... and that's rare.. i really love the plot and it's full of meaning..

great job once again, romulus lupin..

 

Afiz
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/02/04
Everytime I feel like reading a classic, my fingers always find away to this fic. It's simply bautiful, any H/Hr that haven't read this yet - is just being born.
 

Alex
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/04
WOW WOW WOW ^_^ That was an awesome story. I absolutely loved it. IT was the first one I read that included the ghosts in more than a "floating by and saying hi" fashion. It was awesome.
 

Chaosblades
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/04
Wonderfully done. Always love your work. Hope you continue to write for a very, very long time.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/03
Amazing awsome story... read it at least 12-16 times...
 

missingpatches
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/07/03
wowsers.......just realized I need to start leaving reviews. This is a WONDERFUL memory to have of Hermione and Harry. I love it when I can read a story and feel the emotions of the characters as it flows along. Here is an outside (the Minister) with two head students, just walking in Hogwarts. It is lovely how two students (Catsky and Elise Potter), using auditory functions (playing the piano), can make memories alive. It is wonderful how at the end, you say she is in a trance, and that it is Hermione's and Harry's first realization of love and first dance that puts it there. Great Job!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/06/03
Wow!! Another amazing story,romulus lupin. Your brilliant story telling skills, combined with u're amazing ideas, have created another MAGNIFICENT story. U've awakened the faith in me, H/Hr 4ever... and ever ... and ever.... how long does forever last?
 

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