Alright, so now I'll put it in my favorites. I'm an idiot sometimes....

Good first chapter, by the way. Keep up the great work!

I've read this story before, and I remember that I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm going to add it to my favorites list now, so I can read it whenever I want to! Which, actually, I'll begin again shortly!

Anyway, thanks for posting! God bless!

I hereby crown thee Queen of Fluff!
An excellent and well written romance. I enjoyed it very much.

We here have been listening to Jim Dale's great reading for years, and so I can place Dobby's voice rather like you do. An exceptional thing, how he has caught the whole story so well. Come to think of it, our first copy was on cassette tape, its been that long, then a rather choppy Napster version, then we broke down and got the full set on CD. A long history with Harry our family has. This is a great piece of writing. I would love to be able to listen to it as well as reading it.

wow the total and complete union of h/hr lol i love ur writing in how u convey emotions so well

Good chapter, looks ok so far. Hope they don't have a hard time of it.

gunny

Very interesting start. Hope it isn't a sad story. There are soooo many of those that they get tiring very quickly.

gunny

One of the best stories I have ever read. I was expecting more of harry and hermione together but this was something different and intresting. You have a creative way of writing stories. Cant wait to read more. Please write more and try to put some more fluffiness into it.

This story is the best I have ever read! I absolutely loved every single chapter of it. I read it all in one go. Took some time to finish but it was all worth it. I really like how you mix all the romance along with the humor. There were some parts where I coudn't stop laughing.
You're a really good writer and I really love your style. I wish that Harry and Hermione really would get married and have a love so pure like the one you very well describe. It's just a wish though and it seems that it can't come true.
Your story was awesome and I really hope you keep writing more!

Oh this was very very good. I loved all the gifts & the entire celebration. I also adored that you had Sirius around & not killed off.

Lisa

this was so good and detailed!You are a great writer! I read your other stories. Keep it up!

outstanding i never could write a story as good as this well done.

This is one of the most amazing stories I've read on Portkey. I look forward to reading your other stories.

Have I ever told you just how winderful this story is? Have listed it in my MSN space just now: http://spaces.msn.com/members/maritrapvabo/
I love it. Go you.

To comment on your story, I would have to say through chapter 12, it was a good read and I was glued (cookies to you ^^). Unfortunately, after that chapter, it lost its touch rather quickly. It was set up *too* perfectly and although I am a true H/Hr fan all the way, it became too perfect and slightly annoying . To make a connection with you, I find that in my own writing, I sometimes tend to do the same thing – trying to make things go the exact perfect way you think that the couple hoped for and deserves. I’ve tried writing some wedding stories before and I overload them with fun gifts or special parts that embrace the perfect wizard wedding. I just don’t like how the end result is. In a way, it’s exactly what you hoped for but you end up hating what you’ve written. I'm sorry if I was rude, (truly!) but it’s just my opinion on the subject. In some situations, H/Hr’s cute flirting became a little too cheesy and I had to sigh and shake my head. Over all, it’s a cute idea but overdone. Still, cookies for you for keeping it up for 25 chapters – I wouldn’t have been able to do it. 

"If you take out all the sugarcoated-ness it might be better." – a friend of mine